Just a small heads-up for anyone reading this tale, I updated the main chapter a bit to flesh it out a tad; not a huge amount of changes but several hundred more words now to hopefully add some weight. Also, added a bonus chapter with Beatrix/Shining/Cadance/Trixie! Happy clopping to anyone who enjoys! 
A/N: I do not own the characters or creatures of Ranma ½ MLP:FIM or the Dungeons and Dragons monster manual. As much as I would like to own them, possess them, or control them they are first and foremost the respected property of their creators.
Twilight upon noticing her brother's royal guard armor.
TS: Yeah, I think it's a little too "LATE" for protection now, don't you?!
So... I haven't been to bed in roughly... what, thirty hours? I get weird when I'm tired. I start slurring my words, I will trip over every goddamned thing between here and the bathroom, including invisible turtles... and I forget important information.
New chapter is done. Maybe I'm in a weird mood but it just reads strangely to me. Can't tell if it's fine or the writing really is weird...
Chapter's done and I hope you enjoy it!
Today, I released Chapter 3 of Flurrysitting 101, which focuses on Shining Armor, Flash Sentry, and Applejack's struggle to find Flurry Heart as a mysterious threat lurks around the Crystal Empire's streets. It was a very fun chapter to write, and serves as the introduction of the everypony's favorite flying squad: the Wonderbolts!
Holy crap this chapter took more work than chapter 8, despite being like half the size. I used to have this nasty issue of glossing over something that I didn't feel like explaining at the moment or planning on explaining later then forgetting. I didn't take good chapter notes as I went along.
*spoilers if you haven't read chapter 9*
Howdy, folks! First and foremost, as always, Adorable Applejack:
"Perfectly balanced, Sugar Cube! As all appuls should be!"
Now then...
Honestly, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with this chapter. Mostly some bland descriptions and not setting the mood properly.
Okay this time I admit I abused the "I did this..." rule a tone. There were other random sections where I knew I had a purpose for them at the time, but after rereading it, I had no idea what they were reffering to. I spruced up some of the descriptions, as a lot of it felt kind of...basic. I added in more emotion and tried to really drive home hoe the current predicament was psychologically messing with the Taraskans.
Hope you all enjoy and as always, thanks for being a fan! 
Aaaaand there we go! This chapter was a little more tricky. I had some confusing numbers in the squads and made some writing errors. Also there was some context confusion about who was doing what. not sure if anyone noticed or cared, but I did. Tried to make it a lot more gut-wrenching and heart-breaking.
SPOILERS if you haven't read past this chapter.
Okay so my ending plot points are just...super messed up and I have to fix them. There's a lot of " Situation A needs to happen so person B can save person A, but person B can't get there until situation B and AAAAAAAHHHHH!
I thought I had resolved this, but when I started writing the chapter, I realized there's a few vital details I missed and changing ONE changes like three others so I'm taking time to figure it out.
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