Rating Scale:
12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
10/10—the standard rating; awesome film with a couple of flaws
9/10—a wonderful film with several flaws
Okay so I came across an AI story generator, and normally I would never do anything like this with AI, since some don't like AI, also since FIMFIction doesn't allow AI Stories, and anyway, as much as I like AI, let's face it, AI can be really horrible sometimes. Let's get into this first I start with what I didn't like about it. Well first of all it wasn't really written as fanfiction, it was more like a review of fanfiction, than the story, It's full of mistakes, (I tried to fix what I could
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
Shipping. Some people hear it. Some people fear it. Some people just won't go near it!
So, remember when I said Amy Keating Rogers is not a perfect writer. Well, this is one of those times where her writing is not as strong as it could've been. Don't get me wrong. This is still a good episode. There are a lot of hilarious jokes, some of the commentary is actually clever, and the message, while pretty overdone, is still a timely one. With that said, the episode does suffer from a lack of subtlety, and some of the characters do have a few annoying moments here and there. It's
A simple and sweet plain-old news roundup for this week, folks. Feels like it’s been a while since one of those.
Grrrrrrrrrrrrreetings everypony, and welcome back to Deconstruction is Magic, my Retrospective/Review/Analysis of every episode of My Little Pony: Friendship is magic ever. Today, we have a strange one, showing us that only the strangest of ponies knows how to handle a Parasprite plague: it's Swarm of the Century! Without wasting any more time, let's get on with the analysis! I am the Mage of Mind, reminding you, as always, that even a
The first in the Warcraft line, Warcraft: Orcs Vs Humans is just that. Orcs fighting humans. There is a campaign mode that gives you a story as to what's going on at the moment, but there's not much by way of history, which was later molded by Blizzard into the background known so well by many WOW players.
A lot has changed in two years.
In 2021, I was thinking of wrapping things up here. I hadn't published anything in years, my writing projects were going nowhere, and other hobbies were taking more of my time. At some point late in the year I decided I would read the best stuff on the site (by some reckoning), maybe publish one last thing, and then put a bow on it and log out of the fandom for good.
Then... A few things happened.
Welcome back writers, and welcome to the start of a new topic list! That’s right, we’re on Topic List #24. Once this one’s been written out, we’ll be headed to #25!
Story review: #28 The Sun and the Star
—by General Alduin
Characters:
Sunset Shimmer: I really like the way you highlight who Sunset is in this story it feels very organic. And I appreciate the amount of characterization we get for her in such a short run-time.
Starlight Glimmer: This alternate human version of Starlight is interesting….
…..because although she is very similar to the Starlight in the pony world/the canon she also isn’t.
Overall. Ancient, introverted angst struggles in vain to defeat a modern enemy.
Best lines:
She slowed down when passing by the box of foul magic, and kept her eyes on it the whole time, she wouldn’t show weakness to it. The machine responded in kind[...]
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
B- (a good episode with numerous flaws but still rewatchable)
This week the latest 45 minute long advertisement for brushable horse toys (and horse toy accessories) was released on Netflix. Thanks to fandom, I was able to watch it too. This episode is in "chapter 3". It looks like this will turn out to be the only episode in "chapter 3".
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(Originally written March 30th 2024)
Was feeling rather motivated to read another one in the series so I read through it last night and earlier today. Have to say, the author of these really knows how to write these characters.
Story review #8: Obelus —by applejackofalltrades
Warning this story and the review talk about: Suicide and Suicidal thoughts
Character’s:
Sunset Shimmer: Sunset is actually really in character compared to a lot of fanfics I’ve read (mine included)
And her anxiety about something/insomnia all matched up to her in canon self pretty well. I also so think she would be the overprotective Gf to Wallflower if they were in a relationship.
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
Before I talk about the season, I think I need to address the fact that it’s been 3 months since I made my last season review. You may think this is because Season 6 was so bad that I had to take a break or something, but that couldn’t be further from the truth. I’m actually midway through Season 8 now. I was just lazy when it came to writing this. With that out of the way...
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Overall. Dost thou propose also to conquer Limestone's frigid abyss?
Best lines:
“Pa!” Limestone bellows. “The dick’s here!”
Something warm and taut brushes up against my side. I look over to see Marble gently pressing up against me, her belly pushing into my coat, looking completely deaf to the outside world.
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