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Nov
20th
2023

My Review on An AI Fanfiction · 8:19pm Nov 20th, 2023

Okay so I came across an AI story generator, and normally I would never do anything like this with AI, since some don't like AI, also since FIMFIction doesn't allow AI Stories, and anyway, as much as I like AI, let's face it, AI can be really horrible sometimes. Let's get into this first I start with what I didn't like about it. Well first of all it wasn't really written as fanfiction, it was more like a review of fanfiction, than the story, It's full of mistakes, (I tried to fix what I could of the story). and I'm not saying that's a bad thing, since nobody is perfect, but you would think since it's AI, it would fix that. Another thing I thought was odd was it called Gilda a Pony, but then later it says she is a griffon, I mean okay! So Gilda is Living in Ponyville, Like what happened to Griffonstone, Grandpa Gruff, Gabby, Gallus, and other Griffons. Now one thing I did think was odd, but also liked, was that Troubleshoes can play the guitar, now I may be biased here, but can you picture trouble shoes playing the guitar? (mmm.. maybe I can). Another thing I thought was odd, was it said, the couple the story was talking about, and I quote ''was a ship destined for a happy ending''. I mean can you imagine if someone said that about, you and you're partner, like that? Okay let's get to what I liked about the story, I really liked how AI worded it how the AI wrote the style of the story, and of course the paring/shipping. (But the shipping thing was a me thing, so I guess that doesn't really count). You can read the AI-generated story below this review, Let me know what you think about the story and AI-generated stuff. Oh and one last thing it is a shipping story, of a pairing I like, just a heads up.

Here is the story.

Gilda was probably the last pony in all of Equestria who wanted to fall in love. After all, she was a rough and tumble griffon and the concept of romance. was something very foreign to her. However, when Gilda met Troubleshoes, the smooth-talking, guitar-playing newcomer to Ponyville, her heart was instantly drawn to him.

At first, Gilda and Troubleshoes's relationship moved very slowly, Gilda was determined to keep Troubleshoes at arm's length and remain emotionally distant. However, once the two of them started spending more time together, it was undeniable that there was an unspoken bond between them. Eventually, after long talks under a star-filled sky, Gilda finally decided to take a leap of faith.

Although the two of them led very different lives, Gilda soon realized that the work to make their relationship work was worth it. Together, Gilda and Troubleshoes formed a bond that was strong and unique, basking in each other's differences and embracing the struggles that came with embracing romance.

Despite their differences, Gilda and Troubleshoes were inescapably drawn together each and every day. Gilda, more than anything she had experienced before, now found true joy in spending time with Troubleshoes, laughing, and living life to the fullest. In the end, it came down to one simple fact: Gilda and Troubleshoes were meant to be together.

The two of them grew closer, and soon it was clear to everyone that Gilda and Troubleshoes were a ship destined for a happy ending. Though it had taken Gilda some encouragement to open her heart to love, she was now thankful that she had allowed Troubleshoes to be a part of her life. As Gilda now says, 'Never give up on love, because when you least expect it, you'll find it!'

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