great story so far plz keep it up

8281442
Really? Because I thought it was trash. This was my first story and I cringe when I read it, I guess I'll make time for it but I'm working on a different story that is exceedingly better. Thanks though, it means a lot to know someone liked something I made.

Sincerely,
Yogi

8281927
its not bad there is some miner details as far as descriptions and misspelling but other then that its not bad for a first try at a long story need to have more confidence in yourself and you'll find what it is thats to be done

8282507
Thanks! As is, I started this a while ago and I had a vague idea of how to write. Now after studying others' works and really getting into a story I can write at a decent level. Don't expect a chapter too soon because I literally have a blank slate with this story, I actually have to go back and reread it to actually know where to start...

Sincerely,
Yogi

P.S. Thank you for your egging me on and giving a little inspiration to a 14 year old who just wants to shine a little light on this dark world, even if I only reach a few people with my writing that's at least better than none

8282533
i look forward to the next chapters to come when u finish them