Dominance stories · 4:51pm Oct 3rd, 2016
It's the strangest thing. I've read several of these stories, finding few that I really liked, yet I still find myself wanting to write them. I've heard descriptions of the fetish, of getting a thrill about putting the power and control in the hands of another, but have read few that I really liked. A Weekend Maid for Spike https://www.fimfiction.net/story/31982/a-weekend-maid-for-spike remains one of the few that can really appeal to me, but I feel I need more of a grasp of the concept before I can write it with any real effectiveness.
Any suggestions? I'm looking for some consensual dominance with all parties happy to partake. It goes without saying that this will be making an appearance later in the story. Links to the stories would be appreciated.
I think my story, "Flitter Gets Caught," fits the bill - it's certainly predicated on some strong dominance. I don't want to spoil things, because I wrote it a very particular way, but I will say the setup and characters are a bit nonstandard for fimfiction, and that I only write "good ends."
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/143516/moonstone A great bdsm story involving luna
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/344305/fishing-at-the-communal-cum-baths
multi part story with more than just sex
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/343715/paybacks-a-dish-best-served-with-chocolate
mostly sex very little story
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/324162/my-little-apple-pet
apples beginning to get into a Dom/Sub relationship with ponka
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/29576/competent-villains-chrysalis
Chapter The Defiant has what you're looking for I feel though if I remember correctly the entire story is pretty good
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/289913/the-rules-of-mistress-rarity
can't quite remember this one but I know its good
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Troposphere
this guy
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/275162/her-most-faithful-servant
good for explaining what a sub/dom can feel
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/94526/twilights-plan
TwiXLuna clop with large story
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/86615/rainbow-dash-discovers-erotic-mind-control
sub/dom with hypnotism DashXTwi
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/242072/prim-and-proper
good for a simple sub/dom fic RariDash
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/143525/not-another-rapefic
the title is correct later on it is explained that Celestia has a rape fetish and wants to be dominated in a way she can't say no, but by someone she trusts
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/37108/dream-a-little-dream
If I remember correctly you want fluttershys dream can't remember the others
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/48772/the-sunday-session
and its sequel
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/217541/risk-aware-consensual-pony
in one of them Twi is really into pain but I can't remember which but it is still great for understanding Dom/Sub relations
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/185534/lyras-secret
Lyras human bf finds out about her secret fetish
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/114689/fluttershys-self-bondage-misfortune
fluttershy gets caught doing self bondage by rarity and gets a Dom from it.
and there are some more I have but I feel have too much other things in them that might distract from the sub/dom thing or might turn someone away from the story so pm me if you want those also I may have let some of them slip into this sorry
4238577 I'll second Moonstone, one of the best erotic stories on Fimfiction. It's almost shameful to mearly call it clop.
4238645 I am going to be busy for a while. Thank you.
4238577 I'll give it a look.
4238695 you're welcome, and I hope to see what you put out from this.
The best (and most informative) one I've seen so far is http://www.fimfiction.net/story/337594/clocktower-society-your-safe-word-is-law
I run through that every now and again in Cost of Asylum and even one in Twisted Fate. Cost has several Dominance things, including one I'm working on right now. Never done bridles before, so I'm curious how it will turn out.
Changeling Vs Predator would probably be fun for you, or Revenge from Cost of Asylum
Ok, just looked through my fav's and what I could recall for a few. The Night's Master, Of Night's and Nightmares: Conquering the Moon, and A Yellow Sun Turns Red, I'd also suggest To Innocently Conquer if you haven't read it. Not a lot of dom, but considering where it's going...could turn pretty fun if he realizes his power.
4239205 Interesting
Kinda weird that over the course of my internet life domination and bdsm have gone from really kinky to almost vanilla at this point to me
Not so shameless self plug for my one and only story on my account at the moment.
Which I haven't updated in years, which is the cause for the bit of shame. *long sigh*
Not enough time in the day.
Personally, I say that your story would be better off without such overt fetishism.
Have you considered that perhaps you just want to find a way to express "aggressive sex" in a way that it is more focused on the aggression aspect? If such is the case, then I would strongly advise you to not incorporate fetishism. That way lies hell anyway.
4239946 Then might you recommend something along those lines?