We need about 50 milligrams of boom chicka wow wow in this fic STAT!!!

Oh Gawd Yes.

Ponified Red vs Blue? With Caboose? Pardon me if I don't read this immediately, but I have to clean my pants.

Well, you've captured Caboose's personality perfectly. The writing is fairly well done, but there are a few errors, mostly in comma placement. Nothing I feel like detailing right now.

One issue: it was a little difficult to tell if Caboose was still human or had been turned into a pony until Rarity called him a stallion. The personalities of the mane six are a little flat as well, but they're not really the stars of the story.

In any case, this isn't bad. Might have to check back on it some time.

I can speak just like sarge. I mean it's scary how good I can do his voice. I have actually help a friend do a fan dub of RvB and I did sarge, it was amazing.

wow, i never though i would see such a perfect characterization of caboose before.  with that + pinkie pie X caboose shipping!? how can i not track?

Awwww poor caboose

>>291476291476

Yeah, I wrote this at about 5 in the morning so there will be quite a few errors and you are correct, I am not going to be really going on any of the ponies in much details besides Pinkie.

An now that you mention it I will go and fix it so Caboose finds out about his no-hands much faster.

And everyone else, I thank you for your nice words

Pinkie Pie x Caboose.

The word "terrifying" comes to mind.

*Finishes first chapter.

YES

*Track

This is brilliant.

>>291573291573

Thank you, I did not expect there to be so many RvB fans on here, but I am happy that I am playing it off right

You sir, are a genius. Please, I need more!

d'awww

I feel bad for thinking this but I can't wait for Church to come and ruin Caboose's fun

"A loser." Church said" i didit even read the whole thing and saw this.  fix it, NOW!

also, DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW

>>291725291725

Fixed, thanks for catching that. I originally had planned for Church to be there now, but decided I would like to make it a longer story then I had planned, seeing as people seem to be somehow liking this story ;P

D'aaawwwwww. You gotta love Caboose. Also Pinkie is perfect for him.

Reading back this chapter (and not for proof reading) I actually daw'd a bit myself. Didn't think I would

>>291734291734 also, you should probably ad a romance tag.  alternate universe doesn't fit.  

>>291740291740 and the best part is that nopony considered that untill today.  this IS the best day EVER! also, no dislikes yet! (cant say im surprised, everyone loves caboose. except for tucker.  and church. and the reds. and tex. and... i think il stop now)

>>291748291748

Changed that. I had not originally planned for them to get together, I really planned on them just hanging out, but I am glad a changed that

>>291756291756 i would say get rid of the random tag also, but EVERYTHING with caboose is random.

>>291762291762

And everything with Pinkie is random.

That makes it a double random.

Just making Caboose a pony has melted my brain.

You have done what many have only thought of even bothering to do...

And now I'll have to kill you for doing it before me

Who's to say (that is if Caboose goes back) that Pinkie won't go back with him?

So George threw Caboose out over Equestria. It all makes sense now.

>>291860291860 in fact, whose to say that caboose go's back at all?

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>>291942291942

Shhhh you're guessing one of the other ones :O

i just hope they don't mention spiky kittens!

OGAWD Y U GIVING ME IDEAS AND MAKING ME CONFUZZLED?

The soundtrack of rvb is helping me think of the endings and I don't know how I'll choose now

I LOVE THIS! PLEASE KEEP IT GOING! church better never come and get him

>>292016292016

I'll try.

>>292016292016

^this one please

i have always wondered why no one made something like this and now i have found it. this is to great keep going

It's... too... epic... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH-*explodes*

Church: "Caboose! What'd you do to him?!"

Caboose: "That wasn't me...... Tucker did it."

Tucker: "Hey!"

This is the 3rd Red vs Blue crossfic I've read, and it is so amazing.

Keep up the good work. I just might support CaboosexPinkie

i cant believe this thing still has no dislikes.  its amazing.  i support this fact.  we might even get it up on the featured bar!

Dun dun DUN.

pfffffffft

cant say i saw that coming.  id prefer if this went on a littel longer.  theirs so much potential for this to be a great fic. but if you really want to end it, don't ask us for an opinion, do what you think will be best.  

edit: feels?

PinkiexCaboose?

F***ING GENIUS.

Alright guys, I'm letting you guys choose how the story ends/continues. The choices are at the end of the fifth chapter.

>>292332292332

Yes. Pinkie/Caboose might end up getting hurt... badly.

>>292345292345

"/continues"

this is the key word efend, use it!

>>292368292368

Choose one of the actual choices

#1 - Caboose stays put.

#2 - Church tries to make Caboose leave, but he fights back.

#3 - Caboose get's forced out.

#4 - Caboose goes out, but Pinkie Pie tags along - (Warning, this ending may contain feels meaning something sad WILL happen)

#5 - Celestia intervenes in a good way.

#6 - Celestia intervenes in a sad way.

First one to get three votes will be the ending I play off of

>>292409292409 #7 all the endings.

>>292469292469

Deal.

What, Caboose saying that Church isn't his friend HERESY

joking aside very well done.

>>292547292547

He just finally had enough time to think

This is defiantly one of the greatest cross over fics ever...of all time

>>291978291978 just doing my job

Lose and Win or Win and Lose, my fellow bronies we must choose.

Has this story reached its end, or is something waiting around the bend?

Personally I vote 1,2 or 4.

Honestly I'd really like for Church and Sarge to stick before they all left or what have you.

For endings (which I hope is NOT going to approaching just yet) I'd pick #2

>>292665292665

They'll be staying for 1 or 2 chapters to see what Caboose has been doing, but then I will choose

(I am hoping for number 2 as well, because I have a plan for Carolina and not a good one )

Celestia ending #1 - Intervenes in a good way.

>>292680292680 Celestia ending #1

If this gets a sad ending I will eat your legs

>>292793292793

How about the pinkie pie pie and caboose leave, it would somehow tie into cannon for season 10...

Happy Ending 2! No, wait, Celestia intervenes in a happy way! No, wait, Happy Ending 2 is better! Or is it? I guess... Not really. What about Celestia intervenes in a happy way? I guess that could work, but what about Happy Ending 2? That would work even better! Or would it?

...All right, I kid. I vote A secret ending! In which Caboose is granted free access through the two worlds. Now that'd be fun to see. Right? Right?

...Right?

...No? Fine. Happy Ending 2 then.

>>292823292823

That is what I was thinking when I thought of that outcome

>>292680292680 Ah mate you're killing me here. I want so many more adventures with these three fools roaming Equestria.

I mean think about it, time potentially moves so much faster in Equestria than 'reality'

Just a thought friend, just a thought

Also for some reason I had the thought of Sarge and Church getting into a territory grab match in Ponyville.

well played good sir, well played.

in othor news, what?  21 likes?  and no dislikes?  *crushes scouter* THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!

>>292998292998

I know right?

And before you guys say "I thought Caboose now started to think of Church as NOT being his friend" just remember.

It's Caboose.

He's a giant lovable idiot.

Your legs will remain uneaten.. for now

>>293041293041

in other news, this is really good.

D'aww someone disliked it

Ahwell, can't please everybody

1 or 5 for me

Holy fuck I've been waiting for something like this!

Holy hell its like watching the show!

I have four points though

1 send this to rooster teeth/ animate it

2 does caboose like pinkie because she reminds him of Dougnut

3 is caboose Gonna freak out when he sees and hears big Mac?

4 can some one draw a caboose and pinkie picture?

and thus more of the RvB crew joins the MLP cast. The only question is how many will join before this story ends? Keep goin and stay golden^^

>>293383293383

I was thinking about asking someone on DeviantArt or something to make a picture of Caboose hugging Pinkie Pie. And no, Caboose isn't reminded of Donut

>>293385293385

Just one more person (Well 3 more as I am writing a chapter with some more of them) from the RvB series is planned on coming in as of now, but you never know what lies until later on.

Whee! Awesome story, so tracking this. Caboose and Pinkie are just too great together. Hope the story ends well!

oh good lord yes

Sir I offer you my first born son for this.

>>293622293622

I'm just glad I found a way to make them stay in the story for a LOT longer

>>293624293624 Bloody brilliant you brilliant bastard!

Now I have my favorite Red with my favorite Blue (Caboose). This is gonna be great. I'll bet Church will hate this place a lot

Hmm Pinkie x Caboose?

How bad could it be....?

This intrigues me go on

>>293640293640 I concur

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Fancy Talk , Also wow you wright fast

>>293952293952

You think so? I actually think I am a slow writer

>>293975293975 Eh for posting this much in one day your doing pretty good, Im trying to wrestle writing a monster two thousand word chapter its going to kill me xD   Also i don't think ive found a red vs blue cross over like this kudos.  

>>293980293980

Sorry, I just find it easier to pump out smaller chapters, as long chapters make me not want to do them.

>>293993293993 When i'm back from school, i want to be atleast one chapter MOAR!!

>>294009294009

I'll try

Have you ever read 9 Knackered Souls on fanfiction.net?

Another amazing fic starring the cast from Red vs Blue.

Fic suggestion aside, keep up the good work

>>294152294152

I'll give it a read later today

Alright which pair would you guys like to read first? I'm going to bed so when I wake up I'll see which one gets expanded upon at the beginning. All of them will be done one after the other so don't worry.

>>293149293149

Indeed, it made me realize what a tragic and sad character Caboose is. He is like Halo's Derpy though, always facing hardships with a goofy smile

"Yeah, I'm starting to feel better now."

So am I, Caboose...

So am I.

>>294163294163 Tucker and rd, it pains me to think what he might try

>>294423294423

YES. ALL MY YES.

Make Tucker crack a lesbian joke, and RD go ballistic on him. PLEASE. It will be better than watching Tex lose it.

>>294435294435>>294423294423 NO!  SAVE THE BEST FOR LAST IDIOTS!  i think sarge and AJ will be a good first one.  set the mood for the rest of the story.

edit: and NOTHING is better then watching tex lose it on the reds and tucker.

Hooray the, antics shall continue

its days like this I miss Donut.

i just realized that this fic has as many views in 1 day then my main fic got in A WEEK AND A HALF!  i guess you could say im...

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>>294469294469 I just can't wait for the mane 6 to comment about how horrible they all treat each other.

O god, you captured the cast of RvB perfectly!

My sides are splitting!

"But usually someone is under me" You have Tucker perfect in this story.

You have the rvb characters perfectly! Well done.

i just noticed that it's been labeled with sex and gore tags.  while i can understand the sex (you are going to put RD and tucker in the same room after all), with the mood of the story so far, it just doesn't seam like gore will fit. im just wondering what your planing that it would be necessary.  

>>294821294821

Well, I can say that there will be some later on, but i don't want to spoil much.

>>294963294963 ok, just wondering.

A WINNER IS ME!