Mistakes
"That was amazingly done." Flint said, walking up to Tucker.
"Uh, thanks." Tucker said, who was now starting to feel the pain of the kick. "Who are you exactly?"
"My name is Flint Westhoof. But you can call me Flint." Flint said, extending his hoof to Tucker. "That was remarkable. How much time did you spend practicing that?"
"None. I kind of just made it up on the spot." Tucker said.
"I find that hard to believe." Flint said.
"It's true, Tucker has never led me to believe that he ever thinks ahead on anything." Simmons said.
"Thanks Simmons." Tucker said sarcastically.
"That makes it even more impressive." Flint chuckled.
"Thanks, I guess." Tucker said.
"Tucker, I am in awe. That was beautifully done." Rarity said.
"Glad you liked it." Tucker laughed.
Rainbow Dash then walked up to Tucker and punched him in the shoulder. "Come on Rarity, don't make Tucker's ego any bigger. He might end up being too heavy to stand on the clouds." Rainbow Dash said.
"I don't think it can get any bigger than it already is." Simmons chuckled.
Tucker glared at Simmons but started to laugh. He then turned to Rainbow Dash and winked.
"You're just jealous because you didn't think of making a tornainbow." Tucker said.
"Right, because I want to think like an idiot and come up with stupid names for things." Rainbow Dash said with a smile.
"Pft, say what you want, I know you're impressed." Tucker said.
"Well maybe just a little bit." Rainbow Dash said.
"What is in the envelope?" Rarity asked.
"Nothing." Rainbow Dash said, tucking the envelope under her wing. "Nothing at all."
Rarity looked at Simmons and they both shared a shrug. Simmons then looked at Tucker and started to smile.
"What are you smiling about?" Tucker asked.
"Look." Simmons said simply.
Tucker looked at his flank and saw that he had gained his mark. It was a double helix, one strand being a lightning bolt, the other being a rainbow, and at the top the two strand met and a green star was at the top. "Sweet." Tucker said emphatically.
"Looking good Tucker." Rainbow Dash said.
"Aren't I always?" Tucker asked sweetly.
"Maybe when you're on your own, but when you're with me I make you look terrible." Rainbow Dash said.
"Very funny." Tucker muttered.
"Do you have any plans?" Flint asked.
"Sorry man, I don't swing that way." Tucker said flatly.
"You misunderstand. I simply wanted to invite you all to lunch, my treat." Flint said.
"That sounds like a marvelous idea." Rarity said.
"Sounds good to me." Simmons said.
"I could eat." Tucker said. He then turned to Rainbow Dash and waited for an answer.
"Sure why not." Rainbow Dash said. "It's not like I have anything better to do."
"Excellent!" Flint said. "Come with me, I know the finest restaurant in all of Equestria."
The group then shared a nod and they all started to make their way out of the Cloudaseum. Flint then led them all to a large balloon in which they all entered. They chatted for an hour until the balloon landed in front of Canterlot.
"Follow me, it is just a short walk from here." Flint said.
"Okay." Simmons said.
They all followed Flint away from the balloon. After a few minutes they stood in front of a large building with six stars sitting on top of it. "Is this where I think it is?" Rarity asked giddily.
"Yes indeed. Luxor Palace, the most expensive restaurant in all of Equestria." Flint said. He then turned to the others and raised his brow. "Shall we?"
Flint then led the group inside, where they were shown to the restaurant’s finest table. Tucker opened the menu and skimmed through it and noticed something.
They really don't eat meat here, do they? Tucker thought to himself.
The waiter soon arrived and took their orders and hastily left to the kitchen. It took just a few minutes for the waiter to come out with all their dishes and he apologized for the wait.
"I think I like this place already." Simmons said, taking a few bites out of his food.
"Yeah, it's just fantastic." Tucker said, looking at his dish. It wasn't any meat, but that didn't stop it from looking delicious.
"Thank you very much for the meal Flint." Rarity said. "I would say this has been a fantastic day."
"Not at all." Flint replied gladly.
Once they all finished their food, Flint paid the bill and they all made their way out of the restaurant.
"I apologize for this, but do you think you could make it home from here?" Flint asked.
"I think we can manage." Simmons said.
"Good. I hope you all have a fine evening." Flint said. He then bowed and started to trot away.
"Rarity, you and Simmons go on ahead, I need to talk to Tucker." Rainbow Dash said.
"Of course Rainbow Dash. Come Simmons, I simply must show you around." Rarity said.
Rarity and Simmons then left the pair alone and Rainbow Dash sighed.
"What's up?" Tucker asked.
Rainbow Dash looked at the envelope and back to Tucker. She then walked up to him and hugged him tightly.
"Thank you." Rainbow Dash said quietly.
"No problem, it's what I do." Tucker said.
"I'm serious Tucker." Rainbow Dash chuckled. "I'm glad that you did what you did. I don't think I can ever repay you..."
"I can think of one way." Tucker said, raising his eyebrow.
Rainbow Dash shook her head with a crooked smile. "You're really a dog with a bone, aren't you?"
"Yeah, but with a different kind of bone. Bow chicka bow wow." Tucker said, a smile plastered across his muzzle.
Rainbow Dash gazed deeply into Tucker’s eyes and smiled. "What's on your mind?" Tucker asked.
"Well, it's just that... Celestia how do I say this?" Rainbow Dash said quietly, rubbing the back of her neck. "I think I love you."
"What's not to love?" Tucker asked with a smile.
Rainbow Dash smirked and hit him in his shoulder.
"So do you have anything to say?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"Yeah, what's for dessert?" Tucker asked.
"I mean do you have anything to say about me?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"Hmm. Well I have to say that you are pretty hot." Tucker said.
Rainbow Dash turned to Tucker and stared at him seriously.
"Anything else?" Rainbow Dash asked, her voice gaining an icy tone.
"Uh, I like your mane?" Tucker said awkwardly.
"Are you afraid of saying love or something?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"Well, love is a strong word Dash." Tucker said with an awkward laugh.
Rainbow Dash then pushed herself away, staring past Tucker. "What do you mean?" Rainbow Dash asked seriously.
"Well, I mean I've only been here for a couple weeks." Tucker said. "And I do like you, it's just-"
"I can't believe that I actually thought that I liked you." Rainbow Dash yelled, voice cracking.
"Rainbow Dash-" Tucker started.
"I don't want to hear anything you have to say. And I never want to see you near my place again!" Rainbow Dash yelled, angry tears starting to trickle down her cheeks.
Tucker opened his mouth to talk but Rainbow Dash already started to fly away, leaving Tucker all alone. "I really fucked up this time, didn't I?" Tucker muttered to himself.
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Yes Tucker, yes you did.
EDIT: FIRST
SO close... second!
This reminds me of my newest ex
Replace a few words of the talk between tucker and rainbow and it is a perfect replication of how my relationship ended.
(sigh)
ANYWAY Nice job so far looking forward to the daily updates.
he dun fuqed up now
"Simmons then looked at Simmons and started to smile." What...?
You done goofed Tucker.
SHIT JUST GOT REAL SON!
Ya dun goof'd Tucker...
Better not send him to Church I pretty sure he will kick his ass...wait when is Tex entering the picture let her do it.
damn son, that shit was trilfin'
I've been reading this story for half a week, first comment. LOVE it. Perfectly copied RvB, I wouldn't be surprised if you were one of the people making it.
And on a side note, yes Tucker, you reeeaaally screwed up this time
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I just hope rainbow doesn't end up like mine, a FUCKING vengeful crazy psycho BITCH.
Of course Tucker screws up a possible relationship with the one girl that he actually happens to like.
Church to the rescue!....Seriously he's like the only smart guy in that group XD;
Well fuck. Dammit tucker i thought you were a ladies man.
Its gunna suck for him when rainbow dash tells the others... IF she tells the others
"Simmons then looked at Simmons and started to smile." Lol Wut? You may need to fix that
And yeah Tucker, you did fuck up. Anyhow great chapter, keep it up.
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Shhhhhhhhhhhh Simmons has a twin named Simmons. God, didn't you guys know that?
Oh, Tucker.
...You kept digging yourself deeper with every word that left your mouth at the end there, man.
Tucker...ya dun goof'd
Tucker clearly mean platonic relationships when he says he's Dr. Love.
This just proves that Tucker was all talk from the beginning. He couldn't see anypony's feelings if they kicked him in the balls. Wait, Rainbow already did that.
Tucker, I would hate to be you right now.
This inevitably means making up will be fun.
If you consider walking in a minefield fun...
Tucker screwing up? Le shock.
Hmm... Maybe he wouldn't have *ed up if he had been allowed to have the *ing Sniper Rifle!
Good job Tucker. You had the opportunity, and you f***ed it up. No chance of Bow-Chika-Bow-Wow now
i blame my friend nik3 red for all of this NIK3 IF YOU CAN SEE THIS THEN your a dick
OVERREACTING 101
Ya know what. No. Rainbow is in the wrong here. She springs this on him in the middle of the street. While it can be seen they have feelings for each other, Tucker obviously didn't feel comfortable saying "I love you" at the time. The way Rainbow reacted was uncalled for and simply put, she was a bitch about the entire situation.
Tucker, Tucker, Tucker... This is why you can't have nice things.
*shows 'Aliens' guy*
Women... Erm...
Mares.
lol I was just listening to the spehss mehreens song and Boreale said "we shall not fail!!" right when Tucker effd up.
I feel genuinly sorry for Tucker. The one time he takes it slow is the time when it is wise not to.
That's Tucker for you, wants the plot and not the heart.
Moral Of The Story: When Rainbow Dash says she loves you, you damn well better say it back.
I love how what you described as hit cutie mark is not what the story picture says, i understand with simplifying sarges mark, but how is doing a cloud easier then doing a green star? Also, I imagined it as a DNA style helix
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It's simple. I didn't draw the picture.
425173 he saw a mirror, duh!
yes Tuck, yes you did. pfft...blbbt...
oh, oh I'm sorry, it's just what happened right before RD stormed off was just too funny! oh, oh I'm horrible, aren't i?
NIGGA, YOU JUST WENT FULL RETARD!
NIGGA, YOU JUST WENT FULL RETARD!https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ42HPItaG-gXNS7NSCTKJKBdqF-MnoTSVY_CQ75gktmMyGTcgR
TUUUUUUUUCKEEEEEEEEER!!!
Imma be honest here. I'm probably in the minority, but I think RD is the one that's in the wrong. Not for falling in love with him (I mean, he did get her into the Wonderbolts) but for overreacting. It should be obvious to her by now that Tucker is being lighthearted about all the sex jokes and that he (most likely) doesn't just see her as a sex object. Also, just because you love someone, it doesn't mean they love you back, even if they do see you as a close friend or even a bit more.
Well, he's being honest. Stupid, but honest. Gotta admit, that's better than lying and sleeping with RD, which is what Tucker would have done...
Holy shit? Accidental character development?
Wait.....let me get this straight.Tucker tells off spitfire and lands Rainbow in the wonder bolts, and rainbow dash gets mad at him for taking it...slow......Mhhhm.......Nah I would get mad too.
425173 426210 I can answer.
Theoretical paradoxical situation that happens because of time travel. A time traveler goes to the past, and does something that would prevent him from time travel in the first place. If he does not go back in time, he does not do anything that would prevent his traveling to the past, so time travel would be possible for him. However, if he goes back in time and does something that would prevent the time travel, he will not go back in time. Thus each possibility seems to imply its own negation - a type of logical paradox.
GASP
I do believe Simmons is...
DISCORD!
I'm sorry did i say something?
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Nobody gives a rats ass of you're fist
Tucker can have anyone he wants, he is the master womanizer, BUT HE FUCKS UP!
tucker just two words
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BRO. I had an idea. A rainboom perfectly timed inside a thundercloud, making rainbow lightning shoot all over the place.
Just a suggestion.
~Jeta~
Tucker errrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Crash. Sooooooo close... MEDIC! Welll that was a royal screw up Tucker.
What? He didnt love her and Dash hates Tucker? WhatIdonteven.... WHAT?!
Men...
WE DONT KNOW WHAT WE DID!!!!!
I feel for tucker, sometimes love can be a bitch to some people, and its only been a couple of weeks, a relationship need just maybe one more week or so to really develop, unless both in the pair know for sure. So yea, Tucker, i feel ya.
Flutter-snipe