We need about 50 milligrams of boom chicka wow wow in this fic STAT!!!

Oh Gawd Yes.

Ponified Red vs Blue? With Caboose? Pardon me if I don't read this immediately, but I have to clean my pants.

Well, you've captured Caboose's personality perfectly. The writing is fairly well done, but there are a few errors, mostly in comma placement. Nothing I feel like detailing right now.

One issue: it was a little difficult to tell if Caboose was still human or had been turned into a pony until Rarity called him a stallion. The personalities of the mane six are a little flat as well, but they're not really the stars of the story.

In any case, this isn't bad. Might have to check back on it some time.

I can speak just like sarge. I mean it's scary how good I can do his voice. I have actually help a friend do a fan dub of RvB and I did sarge, it was amazing.

wow, i never though i would see such a perfect characterization of caboose before.  with that + pinkie pie X caboose shipping!? how can i not track?

Awwww poor caboose

>>291476291476

Yeah, I wrote this at about 5 in the morning so there will be quite a few errors and you are correct, I am not going to be really going on any of the ponies in much details besides Pinkie.

An now that you mention it I will go and fix it so Caboose finds out about his no-hands much faster.

And everyone else, I thank you for your nice words

Pinkie Pie x Caboose.

The word "terrifying" comes to mind.

*Finishes first chapter.

YES

*Track

This is brilliant.

>>291573291573

Thank you, I did not expect there to be so many RvB fans on here, but I am happy that I am playing it off right

You sir, are a genius. Please, I need more!

d'awww

I feel bad for thinking this but I can't wait for Church to come and ruin Caboose's fun

"A loser." Church said" i didit even read the whole thing and saw this.  fix it, NOW!

also, DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW

>>291725291725

Fixed, thanks for catching that. I originally had planned for Church to be there now, but decided I would like to make it a longer story then I had planned, seeing as people seem to be somehow liking this story ;P

D'aaawwwwww. You gotta love Caboose. Also Pinkie is perfect for him.

Reading back this chapter (and not for proof reading) I actually daw'd a bit myself. Didn't think I would

>>291734291734 also, you should probably ad a romance tag.  alternate universe doesn't fit.  

>>291740291740 and the best part is that nopony considered that untill today.  this IS the best day EVER! also, no dislikes yet! (cant say im surprised, everyone loves caboose. except for tucker.  and church. and the reds. and tex. and... i think il stop now)

>>291748291748

Changed that. I had not originally planned for them to get together, I really planned on them just hanging out, but I am glad a changed that

>>291756291756 i would say get rid of the random tag also, but EVERYTHING with caboose is random.

>>291762291762

And everything with Pinkie is random.

That makes it a double random.

Just making Caboose a pony has melted my brain.

You have done what many have only thought of even bothering to do...

And now I'll have to kill you for doing it before me

Who's to say (that is if Caboose goes back) that Pinkie won't go back with him?

So George threw Caboose out over Equestria. It all makes sense now.

>>291860291860 in fact, whose to say that caboose go's back at all?

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>>291942291942

Shhhh you're guessing one of the other ones :O

i just hope they don't mention spiky kittens!

OGAWD Y U GIVING ME IDEAS AND MAKING ME CONFUZZLED?

The soundtrack of rvb is helping me think of the endings and I don't know how I'll choose now

I LOVE THIS! PLEASE KEEP IT GOING! church better never come and get him

>>292016292016

I'll try.

>>292016292016

^this one please

i have always wondered why no one made something like this and now i have found it. this is to great keep going

It's... too... epic... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH-*explodes*

Church: "Caboose! What'd you do to him?!"

Caboose: "That wasn't me...... Tucker did it."

Tucker: "Hey!"

This is the 3rd Red vs Blue crossfic I've read, and it is so amazing.

Keep up the good work. I just might support CaboosexPinkie

i cant believe this thing still has no dislikes.  its amazing.  i support this fact.  we might even get it up on the featured bar!

Dun dun DUN.

pfffffffft

cant say i saw that coming.  id prefer if this went on a littel longer.  theirs so much potential for this to be a great fic. but if you really want to end it, don't ask us for an opinion, do what you think will be best.  

edit: feels?

PinkiexCaboose?

F***ING GENIUS.

Alright guys, I'm letting you guys choose how the story ends/continues. The choices are at the end of the fifth chapter.

>>292332292332

Yes. Pinkie/Caboose might end up getting hurt... badly.

>>292345292345

"/continues"

this is the key word efend, use it!

>>292368292368

Choose one of the actual choices

#1 - Caboose stays put.

#2 - Church tries to make Caboose leave, but he fights back.

#3 - Caboose get's forced out.

#4 - Caboose goes out, but Pinkie Pie tags along - (Warning, this ending may contain feels meaning something sad WILL happen)

#5 - Celestia intervenes in a good way.

#6 - Celestia intervenes in a sad way.

First one to get three votes will be the ending I play off of

>>292409292409 #7 all the endings.

>>292469292469

Deal.

What, Caboose saying that Church isn't his friend HERESY

joking aside very well done.

>>292547292547

He just finally had enough time to think

This is defiantly one of the greatest cross over fics ever...of all time

>>291978291978 just doing my job

Lose and Win or Win and Lose, my fellow bronies we must choose.

Has this story reached its end, or is something waiting around the bend?

Personally I vote 1,2 or 4.

Honestly I'd really like for Church and Sarge to stick before they all left or what have you.

For endings (which I hope is NOT going to approaching just yet) I'd pick #2