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SpiritOfSnow


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[A MLP:FiM and Kingdom Hearts Crossover]

A golden pony wakes up. He has no memory of himself, and no sense of identity other than a key and a heart on his flank. But his presence attracts the dark creatures called Heartless to the peaceful, light-filled world he lands on, threatening the hearts of ponies everywhere... and tempting the darkness of a certain lunar princess.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 41 )

:pinkiegasp: This is really good. More please!

Never played Kingdom Hearts, but I must admit that this was pretty good for a first chapter.
Will track and comment. Rating comes later :pinkiehappy:
-Glassed

Instant track.

First of this I have seen, and I am huge fan of KH. Nice job.

Must track KH crossover.

It was actually pretty hard to wait until Saturday to post this, as I already had it written for a while. Anyways, you may notice that this chapter is more… hmm… lighthearted I suppose. I apologize for any OOCness. And then there’s Pinkie, who I don’t think I made random and excited enough… I won’t pull a Pinkie ramble on anyone who’s reading this. Enjoy!

PS. Comments are love. :D…

PPS. Chapter title is subject to change. I’m not entirely sure of it.

I liked it. It was a great chapter. I can't wait to see more of this story. :pinkiehappy:

Well the art of flying isn't hard. The only thing you need to do is fall and then miss the ground completely :pinkiehappy:
This is a bit hard for me to follow 100% since I've never played Kingdom Hearts, but this is pretty good regardless :twilightsmile:
-Glassed

One min need to let out my fanboy squee...
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Oh god I fell another one coming on....
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Really enjoying this, and Axel's famous line just made me :rainbowlaugh:
Keep it comin

209153 Btw Glassed, you're like on every story I have read :twilightsmile:

211200 Haha, I'm honestly not surprised. I'm tracking 100+ stories and I've left my mark on at least x2 of that :pinkiehappy:
I'm EVERYWHERE
-Glassed

212034 Long as everywhere isn't outside my window I will be happy.

212377 Bitch please, the window is waaaaayy to unoriginal!
My favorite spot is just under the spacebar :pinkiehappy:
Or perhaps above the tea mug... I'm thinking inside the chimney for these kinds of things :pinkiehappy: :pinkiecrazy:
-Glassed

212382 Ok then...Please excuse me as I load my shotgun and prepare for Axel to do terrible things to you.

212406 You cannot defeat me son. I have the powers of "This shit makes no sense" :pinkiecrazy:
-Glassed

212428 Take a step inside my mind, you would be welcomed. The voices agree with me. :pinkiecrazy:

212431 Axel, John, Morgan, Diana and Leonard cannot help you!
I have taken control of them, using only a piece of toast! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:
-Glassed

212448 Ughh....Where are Sora, Donald, and Goofy when you need them :facehoof:

I had some of this written already, but then neither of the computers I used could read the flash drive it was saved on... I had a lot of important things on there, too. That includes all the references I drew, but at least those are posted. The point is, this was a little more last-minute than the other two chapters.

Anyways. For those who don't follow Kingdom Hearts that closely, I hope this clears things up a little, and I hope that fans don't get bored with it either. Besides explanations, I did add in extra plot-related information in there too, though, so don't skip over anything. Please tell me if you are confused. After all, it may be the kind of confusion I want you to feel or confusion I didn't intend. I'd like to know about either of them.

Also, neither Sweet Dreams/Cream nor Sunburst are OCs. I took them from the list of ponies in the MLP wiki. Sweet Dreams was a pony at the gala and Sunburst was a pony at the weather factory.

Enjoy!

Excellent chapter! An interesting way to go about the pegasi's ability to fly.

Okay! A bit early, because the last one was kind of late.

First of all, I'll be replying to comments more, now. Because, comments are awesome, and I love feedback. It keeps me writing. ;)

Second... the black unicorn filly. I know many people disliked her in the game, be it because of her role, her character, the lack of a true purpose in the actual game, or... anything else. I'm not disagreeing or agreeing, but I like her and she plays a very essential part in this entire story. If you dislike her for whatever reasons, keep in mind that she will be playing a different, purposeful role here, and she obviously is a lot less depressive here. xD

On that note, if you play the games, you may notice that the golden colt and the black filly may seem kind of OOC. Just keep in mind that they can't remember things, so they're naturally going to be naive and carefree, especially in an environment like Ponyville. However, don't worry; I will eventually build them back to character. After all, past experiences really make a character, a character.

One more thing: for fans, don't assume the timezone. I haven't said when and in which game this is taking place. C:

God I think this has officially taken over the BEST FAN-FIC EVER spot! At least in my books.
Now have a moustached Spike :moustache:

You, my good sir, should kill those Heartless with FIYAAAA!!

On one hand yay :yay: a kingdom hearts crossover, on the other hand GRRR :twilightangry2: you wrote one before I did.
but seroiusly, Cool :rainbowdetermined2:

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Ahaha, I wouldn't say the best, there's still all the kinks and OOCness to work out- but thank you, that means a lot to me. ^^

So, have a happy Derpy. :derpytongue2:

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Your comment may or may not be ironic in a way you may or may not figure out.
...killeverythingwithfire

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Just because I wrote one doesn't mean you can't! I'd love to see another KH crossover. :D
And, well, glad you liked it. ;D

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The being upset thing was kinda meant to be Joke I wasn't upset I know I can still write one.

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Ahaha, that's simply glorious. xD Thanks for going through the trouble of arranging it, it was a nice surprise.

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As a die-hard KH fan, I have the OST on MP3 files. I have:
Lazy Afternoons from Twilight Town for casual scenes,
Dive Into The Heart for the scene with Luna and the beginning,
Roxas' Theme for the moment with Sora's heart,
Vector to the Heavans for Xion,
Vim and Vigor for fight scenes,
And several others for boss battles.

a very nice story so far, i certainly hope you will continue it

I'm liking this so far. Thanks for bringing sea salt ice cream to this fic.

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