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Burnt Juice


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After waking up from a horrific dream filled with undying dragons using hacks, the dragonborn finds himself in the happy, heart filled, pony inhabited, Equestria. With his equipment gone, and his shouts unusable, the Dovahkiin must explore and acclimate to his strange new surroundings. WARNING: THE FOURTH WALL WILL DIE AND POSSIBLY YOUR SANITY! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

*EDIT* This is my first fanfic so please leave comments stating what you like and/or dislike. Constructive criticism is welcome and encouraged

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 25 )

im am reading this and it made me cream your pants :twistnerd:

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What the hell is this! Noooooooooo!

Its awesome>>2363234 its awesome if your a Skyrim Fan
:duck:

Read you story on youtube "Limbo limbom"

2363260
I am a Skyrim fan, it's just that this it tooooo... meta for my liking.

>> zombiebwains
I watched the video where you read my story and it shed some light on the cream your pants thing. You're right, no one likes twists:ajbemused:

the 4th wall will not exsit after this fic lol 5/5 :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

meh... funny but still kinda meh:moustache:

Comment posted by Burnt Juice deleted Apr 29th, 2013

Alright chapter 4 is out, and I'm thinking of starting another story to write alongside this one. Probably a dark, horror sort of deal. Stay tuned for... stuff! :D

I will read the new chapters XD :derpytongue2:

i am a hater of MLP:FIM but this, is by far the worst work of them all. please, for my sanity and the sanity of those around you, re install the fourth wall.

2496506
Wait if you hate MLP:FiM, why are you reading MLP fanfiction? Your logic is almost as insane as mine. Good day sir!

2497862
to understand their foes weaknesses, one must live among them.

2497884
Your determination to understand and ultimately take down your foes is comendable. Unfortunately you must die alongside the fourth wall

2497902
YOU ARE NO THREAT TO ME NOW BRONY!

2498048
Im no threat to you NOW. So that means I was a threat at one point? I'm proud to have been a threat... and... I really don't know where I was going with this... :rainbowlaugh:

2503576
your logic implies that you were a threat at one point, but you were never one.

What are these walls of which you speak? I only know of three!

Okay, you had a few good paragraphs in your first chapter, but by this point, I literally can't make myself look at this.

It feels like the one joke that I'll admit to laughing at (Obvious fourthwall genocide) is just being stretched and reworded again and again. Absolutely uninteresting.

It would have been better if you had left it as a one-shot.

2559264
ya i guess i did kind of kill the joke... I think the only reason I'm even continued writing it is to get closure on the whole story... Or whatever it is...

AND TO EVERYONE ELSE-
good news! only one more chapter and it will be finished! forever! and ever! and freaken ever! There will totally never be any more. No im serious one more chapter and you can all resume your misarable little lives... and stuff... ya..........

Welp, that was interesting...

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