Eons ago, across dimensions, six warriors fought against a fearsome evil. With the help of a goddess, they sealed the evil away, using their own bodies to power the seal. The goddess, fearing that the seal might one day be broken, placed the sealed evil and the warrior's bodies in a newly birthed dimension, hoping the abundant magic in this new world would bolster the seal, holding it forever. Turns out, goddesses can make mistakes.
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Maybe each Element will have their own personal warrior. They could go dungeoneering for ancient artifacts. And around they end, Spike finally does something.
Alright, this has my attention.
2348243 Yeah, but have their personalities be antithesis to each other.
2348632 Each warrior could represent an element of war or nature. Maybe they are different species.
2348645 I like the way you think.
2348701 Something to be decided could be; what would each of them be like? Any thoughts?
2348725 I'm thinking something along the lines of The Four horsemen of the Apocalypse; maybe each warrior is specialized in someway (i.e. fighting style or ability)
2348761 That's good. Here is another thought to consider, a sort of DnD class mix. Maybe stuff like a battlemage and a cleric.
But the first warrior that has appeared is humanlike with dragon wings, straight up demigod right there.
Hmm... Well obviously the warriors will either be human or some other bipedal creature, like an ape, but they also might be cats. (Warriors series) They may represent nature, or the elements (wind, water, earth, fire, that type of thing) they also might be the elements of war or warmongering. They may be the elements of sin, but they would need a seventh for that. I hope to see more in the future, as this has interested me so much. (As can be seen from above) All in all, a very good story.
2348786 Unless said demigod is actually the evil that was sealed away.
2348801 Then who was laughing when Sombra died?
2348795 Personally' I'd like for a couple of them to not be humanoid. Also I approve of your avatar.
2348809 Maybe it was released then, but only now chose to reveal itself?
2348795 The Warriors series rules. That is all.
2348817 Maybe they are elements of chaos, for some reason they must work with harmony to save the world. Being chaotic elements would explain why they were sealed away.
2348817 The thing is though, what would the other two elements be? They could be anything, even something that wouldn't make sense with those choices. Like, magic or space, it just doesn't make sense.
2348825 Tis true mine companion, wouldst thou like to speak on said endeavor?
2348844 I have almost the entire series in my closet, I may be missing the most recent books. Firestar is boss and I still can't get over how easily Tigerstar went down.
2348825 That's... a really good idea actually; but doesn't the description kinda imply that they were seal away willingly?
2348834 I was just using The Horsemen as an example; the warriors could be anything.
What are you two talking about?
2348868 (Facepalm) Dude just look it up. If you see any book with a cat on it, its part of the series we are talking about.
2348883 I just did. It looks interesting, but I'm more for sci-fi.
2348868 A very good book series, that's what. And sealed away willingly... They were slaves to an evil overlord, forced to commit terrible crimes, and at the end when they were sealed away, they just let it happen.
2348895 Hmm... Maybe demi-gods, like Percy Jackson, or Heracles. But as to the willingly sealed away, that wouldn't make sense.
2348895 I know I've been up for 40 hours now -so I've probably missed some stuff- but where does it say that?
2348905 Willingly sealed away because they knew they wouldn't win or from regretting their evil actions? That would be interesting.
2348907 Say what? The sealed willingly part? That's in the story description.
2348927 Yeah, I said that. I was talking about the evil slaves thing.
2348927 That's true, but how were they sealed away? Were they encased in stone, turned to stone, or sealed away in a vault-like structure. Or even put into cryo-sleep. It could be many things. Or none of these things.
2348938 The description said a goddess put them into another dimension, one with lots of magic.
2348936 That was me putting ideas for character development.
2348953 Oh, well, I missed that. I'm gonna go, forty hours and all that.
2348968 Bye, see ya later.
2348975 Well, the thing that bothers me the most about that is that it obviously is Equestria, but how they are sealed remains to be seen. Sent away to another dimension, Equestria, but sealed in a tomb or frozen, that is the question.
2348988 For some reason the elements of harmony artifacts can interact with them as well. More story must be revealed before anything can be truly guessed at.
2348995 That's the truth, Truth! Anyway. Good night, I am heading to bed.
2349045 Good night
Did he, like, absorb himself into Twilight or something?
What is this a crossover of?
2353258 hmm.. In all of the fandoms I know of, Zeke is either a name to be feared, or praised. I have read four such books, but none of them come to mind with this story. It seems like a Skyrim crossover, but then that wouldn't make sense with the five other good (bipedal) characters.
2353258 Its not a Skyrim crossover, though it is a fantasy adventure game.
2354266
But what game is it?
2354272 At this point, I can't give that away. It would break the mystery that I have built. Besides, looking at the criteria for the crossover tag, I may just remove it altogether.
2354291
Oh.
All I can hope is that the thing that Fluttershy will awaken will look like Nosferatu Zodd. Look him up on google if you dont know who he is. He's one of my favorite characters of all time.
He is also my avatar picture.
2359456 I promise nothing, but deny nothing as well.
2359827 I must ask, does it say my account is goldmembership? If so, it must be some mistake or I did something to earn it without realizing it.
2360007 Actually, I was wondering the same thing. Is mine showing that? Yours isn't. I heard somewhere that doing certain things unlocks statuses, such as reading a certain word limit, or being sent to a certain number of 502 pages.
2360017 From what you are saying, it might be that we each see our own accounts as gold. I see mine as gold but you don't, you see yours as gold but I don't.
2360026 But I've seen other accounts with it. Example:http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Pabulos
Scroll down and look at the replies he made.
2360046 I do not see a Pablo anywhere and I only see mine as gold. Weird.
2360058 Its gone now...I think we've been April fooled...
2360058 Oh, never mind. Just read the post about it
2362939 Which post?
2363948 Here