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Twilight Sparkle is the most talented physicist in America. When President Celestia and the second most talented physicist in America, also named Twilight Sparkle, ask her to help rediscover Equestria, Twilight finds that she simply can't refuse. The question is, can she overcome an ancient evil in order to save her friends and family, new and old? A humanized reinterpretation of "Friendship is Magic, Parts 1 & 2".

omg new cover art by fellow 808 Brony DragonGirl983!!! Yes, that is indeed the fabled Rolling Stone cover shoot they took some time after the story events :pinkiehappy: Mahalo nui loa Rarah- chan!!!

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Comments ( 73 )

I love it so far! It's My Little Pony meets Indiana Jones meets Wrinkle in Time meets Choose Your Own Adventure. Very entertaining, cerebral, and clever in the storyline and character integration. Can't wait to see how it continues!

This is a good story why don't it have more likes.

Thanks y'all for being so nice to my first fanfic!:pinkiehappy: will update regularly!!!

Its a good story and has solid background. And I'm gonna say I love this HIHE. Which stands for Human in humanized equestria.

2347243 Hee hee hee, HIHE sounds awesome!! Thanks alot!

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Why, thank you internet persons! Your validation brings me such feelings of goodness. Will update soon, now we get into the meaty thickness of it, so to speak

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Any time.

AND OH MY CELESTIA. I THOUGHT I SAW WHERE YOU WERE GOING WITH THIS.:twilightoops:

However, I see a suspicious lack of blood when Luna was run through...:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft: does that mean what I think it means?

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Thanks so much!

hahaha me too! :pinkiehappy:

no spoilers, but I will only say this: Why Wuuuub Wuna :)

Thanks again, will update again soon!

Goddamn generals fault if they hadn't insisted to make military weapons this would not have happened. And THE PRESIDENT IS GONNA BE PISSED THAT HER SISTER IS DEAD. AND DAMN YOU SPIKE FOR BEING A BRAVE SON OF A BITCH.

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hahaha if this was a movie, this would definitely be in the official commentary :)

2371368 maybe I should provide commentary for this story.

In this chapter we delve into the mind of Nightmare Moon. Basically she is trying to reclaim her resting place and we humans are the defilers that have made one huge mistake in disturbing them. Thus they basically doomed themselves. Overall I say it's a great chapter.

Why would Fluttershy just run off if there are so many people hurt? :|

Other some minor things like that, I really enjoyed it!

2377593 Mostly because 1) Spike was the last wounded person brought into The Castle and 2) she was mostly there to assess conditions, there were many other doctors there in the triage unit. Plus, as written, Applejack correctly guessed how Twilight would react, and thought Fluttershy was needed to subdue her peacefully. Lastly, I really wanted to show that, like Celestia, Fluttershy isn't some sort of bloodless saint but has real human emotions, so in a traumatic disaster situation, when she got caught up with Twilight's problems, she started, like Rarity, to deeply care for and bond with her. Hence, the beginning of The Mane Six...
Im glad you really enjoyed it, though! Your criticism is greatly appreciated, its good to hear how y'all r reacting as we move along!

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Thanks! I really wanted to emphasize that Nightmare desired the Americans to be sacrificed to atone for stepping into the taboo lands, she refused to just let them go, but more importantly, she's just pure, unfiltered crazy and evil... we will kinda start pulling the strings together as we go further and the action really picks up...

GRAB SOME LAWS, RPGS, HEAVY MACHINE GUNS AND REVOLVERS IT'S GOING TO BE A BUMPY RIDE.

2382283 It's a great story one that made me want to follow you for.

Had a hard time reading this chapter. All the awesomeness kept blinding me.

I see a courtmarshal in Iron Will's future.

I can picture the Equestrian weapons somewhat representing Forerunner style weapons.

2387893 oh, I could see more possibly in store for General Meanie- Weenie in The Redux Series... but that's just me, personally... ;)

2388028 SUPPRESSOR- FIRING ACTION OVERLOAD :pinkiehappy:

Wow suicidal motherfucker should've said a baddass dieing phrase like FOR THE NIGHTMARE or something.

Let us hold a moment of silence for those five brave souls.

Pinkiebots, you shall be missed.

2391127 Hahahaha:rainbowlaugh: I seriously thought about that, but I didn't want these things to have too much personality... with how much their minds degraded when they were 'interred', they're pretty much just mute killing machines and an extension of Nightmare's will, for the most part...

Holy crap, this is flipping awesome.

Fantastic. I love how this is turning out. Keep it coming! :)

“Oooh,” a blond female communications specialist to her right replied, “Do you think you can get me a muffin? I’m starving,”

DERPY! :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes in her helmet. “Girl, seriously? Get a bunny, or a tortoise, anything,”

Tank and Angel accounted for. :twilightsmile:

... This chapter makes me fear the Pie. The Pie will laugh while you run for your life.

Will the Manticore hide under Fluttershy's porch because he loves her?

I was waiting for this song. Epic job on doing it. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

She said, Pinkie! You gotta stand up tall, learn to face your fears...You'll see that they can't hurt you, just laugh and make them FUCKING disappear!

2400697 as with all things involving love, only time will tell...

2401869 :fluttershysad: {gasp} Mr./Ms./Mrs./Dr. Rainjackpie, such language!!!

Sorry, just really excited to see this updated on a regular basis! This story is like the MMMM, layers and layers of delectable AWESOMENESS!

P.S. I'm a girl. Keep up the great work!

2406641 Thank you! :pinkiehappy: Will be finishing very soon, thanks again for all your warm, gooey, marzipany(?) words of encouragement!!!
edit: no apologies necessary :yay:

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