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The Elements of Harmony and Nightmare Moon

My rendition of how the Elements of Harmony came to be, and what happened to Luna.

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ScootzLover

ScootzLover #1 · Oct 16th, 2013 · · ·

I thought it was good up until Nightmare Moon, then you just seemed to rush it which ruined it for me

emilyanncoons

emilyanncoons #2 · Oct 19th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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To be honest? I liked it right up until Nightmare Moon as well. I tried to revise it a couple times, but I just couldn't figure out how to do it...I think I have a new idea, though, but I likely will be making an entirely new story if I do.