Two ponies, Pheedy and Smart Cookie. One is just a normal pegasus. The other has a dark secret. One that has ruined his dreams for many months. One that can destroy friendships faster than he can make them. For he is a changeling. He never wanted it to be this way, but after the attack on Canterlot, his life took a turn for the worse. Resorting to disguise, Smart Cookie and Pheedy try to settle down in peace, but what will happen if his cover is blown?
Content Rating may change in the future.
More characters added as they are encountered.
Chapters (3)
Interesting. This looks promising, but could use some work.
First rule of dialogue: New speaker, new paragraph.
This seems promising. I look forward to later chapters
Squee.
I like it but you need an editor.
2259238 Yea I know, I kinda messed up on the spacing on this one ._.