The feels man. The feels. So many exes in this. First Scoot/Sweetie, then Octy/Vinyl, and now Twi/Rarity. Who's next, Rainbow and Spitfire? Big Mac and Braeburn? Granny Smith and Mayor Mare?.....oh god that image.....
Just blazed through this from start to here. I can't help but feel we haven't gotten the full story behind any of the breakups. I take it we've got a while to go before this story is done. I eagerly await every word. Props to ya!
Ya'know I honestly didn't think it was Twilight that was her Rarity's ex, it sounded more like it was either Rainbow Dash or Applejack, but now I'm curious to know what the buck happened.
Ok, Twilight thrown into the mix is really grabbing my attention. That and Vinyl (despite her being one of my favorites outside of the Mane Six) done pissed me off again after calling Sweetie a bitch. Seriously, does anyone else want to just drop-kick this version of Vinyl straight in the baby-maker? Because I sure as hell do. Doesn't matter what personal demons she's wrestling with, no one, and I mean no one talks to Rarity, Sweetie and Octavia like that, ever. Still, makes for a good antagonist in the story.
No matter how much I love Vinyl, I always picture her like this xD Even with all the fanfictions making her a normally alright person, this is how I make sure to see her every time. It's more interesting and I think it fits her character better :D
3505249 As far as i can tell, Rarity loves Octavia. who is in a relationship with Vinyl, and Vinyl abuses her, Vinyl has anger issues and is prone to violence. Twilight is rarity's Ex and Vinyls cousin; and is trying to stop Rarity from having a relationship with Octavia or Face Vinyl's wrath. or at least that is what i have so far, But you have probably read this by now and know what happens.
Twilight opened her mouth to retort, but this time Rarity cut her off. “You ripped my heart out, Twilight. I’m not too keen to let you do so to another. How about, just this once, you back off and let me handle this one?” Rarity leaned across the counter, which caused Twilight to back away. “Go home, Twilight. I don’t want you here.”
Okay Twilight what did you do because I don't see any reason why you would break up with her in a malicious way.
Props to Twilight for try and re-kindle their friendship.
this is all i can say at that ending of the chapter....I hope it goes further into this.
The feels man. The feels.
So many exes in this. First Scoot/Sweetie, then Octy/Vinyl, and now Twi/Rarity. Who's next, Rainbow and Spitfire? Big Mac and Braeburn? Granny Smith and Mayor Mare?.....oh god that image.....
Commence read.
Well that was interesting.
Just blazed through this from start to here.
I can't help but feel we haven't gotten the full story behind any of the breakups. I take it we've got a while to go before this story is done.
I eagerly await every word. Props to ya!
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2nd that
oh and why did i think that Rarity broke up with Twilight and not the other way around ? o.O
dang bro... The only way this could have been better if you had read it for me, cause I be a lazy butt mo fo.
I've been waiting what feels like years for this chapter and I'm left in the same state. I need more.
Chapter is amazing, and now I'm left with dozens more questions than before.
Ya'know I honestly didn't think it was Twilight that was her Rarity's ex, it sounded more like it was either Rainbow Dash or Applejack, but now I'm curious to know what the buck happened.
Ok, Twilight thrown into the mix is really grabbing my attention. That and Vinyl (despite her being one of my favorites outside of the Mane Six) done pissed me off again after calling Sweetie a bitch. Seriously, does anyone else want to just drop-kick this version of Vinyl straight in the baby-maker? Because I sure as hell do. Doesn't matter what personal demons she's wrestling with, no one, and I mean no one talks to Rarity, Sweetie and Octavia like that, ever.
Still, makes for a good antagonist in the story.
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No matter how much I love Vinyl, I always picture her like this xD Even with all the fanfictions making her a normally alright person, this is how I make sure to see her every time. It's more interesting and I think it fits her character better :D
What the fuck is going on right now?!
3505249 As far as i can tell, Rarity loves Octavia. who is in a relationship with Vinyl, and Vinyl abuses her, Vinyl has anger issues and is prone to violence. Twilight is rarity's Ex and Vinyls cousin; and is trying to stop Rarity from having a relationship with Octavia or Face Vinyl's wrath. or at least that is what i have so far, But you have probably read this by now and know what happens.
I love your characterization of Sweetie Belle so far. She's grown a lot in the last few years.
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Same
Okay Twilight what did you do because I don't see any reason why you would break up with her in a malicious way.