Perfect, really the only word I can think of for this chapter. A perfect start to a hopefully similar relationship. Though I wouldn't say no to a couple bumps in the road, from either side. Makes for a much more interesting read.
Ahh went to bed last night to wake up to a new chapter. Again another astonishing chapter, beautiful and passionate, far from the more single minded clop fics, this is so much more. A true passionate romance that fills it's readers with a flood of emotion. Reading your art is starting to become a guilty pleasure of my own heh :) I wait anxiously for the next installment.
I couldn't stop myself from reading even though I needed sleep. This has been my favorite moment in weeks. Thank you for everything. I can not wait to see what you write next.
Octavia’s bathroom was dominated by the largest bath tub she had ever seen. Larger even than the spa she used to frequent back in Ponyville, Raritry could have sworn she would be able to swim around inside of this thing without much effort at all.
Teeeeeny little error.
This story, though. . . Absolutely brilliant. You walk that fine line of going overly poetic with incredible finesse; the word choice is always spot on. Everything here is simply flawless.
I have a folder dedicated to shameless clop. This is too good for it. Three dimensional characters, emotional connections and possible romantic intrigue- too much content in this story to be labeled in such a way.
4989807 If it's a member of the Mane 6 then it's proably Dashie or Applejack, Fluttershy doesn't seem the type to hurt her like that and Pinkie wouldn't either. Twilight is also not the type to hurt a friend like that.
i do really enjoy seeing how you have depicted rarity; both in this story, and in previous ones and octavia seems to be a good match for her
Perfect, really the only word I can think of for this chapter. A perfect start to a hopefully similar relationship. Though I wouldn't say no to a couple bumps in the road, from either side. Makes for a much more interesting read.
I'm going to go out on a limb and say that Twi and Vinyl are the exes. If not Vinyl then Lyra.
Awesome work as always Loyal. Keep it up!
Commence read.
Wonder how this will unravel?
Ahh went to bed last night to wake up to a new chapter. Again another astonishing chapter, beautiful and passionate, far from the more single minded clop fics, this is so much more. A true passionate romance that fills it's readers with a flood of emotion. Reading your art is starting to become a guilty pleasure of my own heh :) I wait anxiously for the next installment.
Mane Medic.
I do not often read clopf- *bullshit siren*
...Okay, I do. But this is something else entirely. I've never read one that was as beautiful as this.
Again, beautiful work Loyal. As Medic said, this is becoming a guilty pleasure of my own now too, just reading your work is amazing!
wow Epoch_Win why do you think that Lyra or Twilight were the ex of Rarity ?!
anyway, outstanding work Loyal.
it's so beautiful
The story has been simply excellent so far, can't wait to continue reading.
I couldn't stop myself from reading even though I needed sleep. This has been my favorite moment in weeks. Thank you for everything. I can not wait to see what you write next.
Waiting with baited breath for chapter 7 of this beautiful work of art*
Mane Medic
Just one quick note. . .
Teeeeeny little error.
This story, though. . . Absolutely brilliant. You walk that fine line of going overly poetic with incredible finesse; the word choice is always spot on. Everything here is simply flawless.
It's official. Octarity is now my favorite pairing. Seriously, the world needs more of that.
3505203 Damn fucking straight!
Aaaaaaa yes good
The kiss that bridged from mundane into sexytimes was a sudden transition but I suppose there is a contextual purpose for it.
f/f is hard to make pleasing to me, but that was definitely in the upper echelons of stuff i've read in terms of... personal enjoyment. yea.
You have a way with words that is nothing short of poetic. The way you phrase stuff is really well done and makes this feel... artful.
Now if Rarity would just name her ex already!
I have a folder dedicated to shameless clop. This is too good for it. Three dimensional characters, emotional connections and possible romantic intrigue- too much content in this story to be labeled in such a way.
4989807
If it's a member of the Mane 6 then it's proably Dashie or Applejack, Fluttershy doesn't seem the type to hurt her like that and Pinkie wouldn't either. Twilight is also not the type to hurt a friend like that.