Holy SHIT! Things just got a WHOOOOOOLE lot more interesting! It's funny how i wanted to know who "She-who-should-not-be-named" is in this chapter...then BOOM...its Twilight
Please give us the next chapter!
Edit: Oh and THANK YOU for not doing an 'April Fools Day Joke' on us...I've had enough of them today
Well I certainly did not see that coming. When you wrote about Rarity having a bad breakup I kind of assumed her ex was Applejack, don't know why but it worked in my head. Kudos to you Loyal for catching me completely off-guard with that curve ball, complete swing and a miss on my part. Now we see that drama pot really begin to boil, this ride will be anything but calm I'm sure. I for one can't wait to see what you have cooked up this time.
Holy. Fucking. Shit. Ok, seriously, can things get any worse for Rarity at this point? I mean, god-damn it's like she jumped from the frying pan to the fire to the fucking pilot-light under the stove! I wanted to punch the shit out of Vinyl for talking to Octy the way she did, and then LO AND BEHOLD Twilight just had to show up and complicate shit even further!!
And I missed something, are Vinyl and Rarity both related to Twilight in this fic? Because, that would make them second cousins or something, which would make this a veritable cesspool of "awk-waaaaaaarrrrrrrrd.........."
Needless to say, I'm fucking pissed off at the turn of events, but in a good way, one that makes me want to keep reading to find out if Rarity PUNCHES THE FUCKING SHIT OUT OF VINYL FOR BEING A SNOBBISH LOW-LIFE BITCH!!!!!
*ahem*
Keep up the good work with the fic. Seriously, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Ahhhh, I remember the fic in ADKoL: The Lost Chapters where I had requested Vinyl to show up at Maggie's. And how she and Twi were cousins. Good times.
2362082 No, only Vinyl is related to Twilight. (Notice the similar color scheme between her and Shining Armor. White coat, blue mane with sky-blue highlights? Yeah, totally no relation there.)
2362757 In a weird sort of way, your derp makes sense. I mean, sure, it's still a little awkward (the person can almost be seen as blood family), but in the end, it doesn't even matter, because they are two completely separate people who have no ties to each other, apart from them knowing each other for a long time, but that's how all the best romance ideas are created, right? A person has a childhood friend, they begin to see said friend in a new light, one thing leads to another and before you know it our guy (or gal, in this case) develops very intimate feelings for "childhood friend". Come to find out later that "childhood friend" has had similar feelings for much, much longer than anyone originally thought. So I guess I leave it to you to decide: bang or no bang?
2363598 And when you watch that childhood friend sleep at night, go skinny dipping and streaking with them, and when they leave, you take your vendetta out against other magical students by vaporizing them into nothing.
You know what they say, don't stick your dick in crazy.
I've just been reading these comments over and over and I can't help but play through that episode in my head and sing along in a fit of giggles. This is too good.
well, I ws expecting the drama, but I was not expecting this much drama. I guessed that Octavia hadn't really broken up with Vinyl when she and Rarity... happened, and I'm sad that I was right. Because now the entire situation is shitty and nobody's happy, I want to hate Octavia but know I can't really, and I'm antsy for another update.
Retroactively, everything about the ex being Twilight makes sense, so good job on that. But you might.. want to clarify who's speaking where in the whole "my ex" "my cousin" reveal, because I can totally see where people are getting confused with that.
I know I'm a little late (41 weeks late) but I just have to say: I already shipped Raritwi so that wasn't so much of a surprise, but Twilight and Vinyl are cousins?!?!?!?!?!?! HOLY BUCKING SHIT I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING!!!!!!!!!!! Great job, sir I'll favorite this definitely
Holy SHIT! Things just got a WHOOOOOOLE lot more interesting! It's funny how i wanted to know who "She-who-should-not-be-named" is in this chapter...then BOOM...its Twilight
Please give us the next chapter!
Edit: Oh and THANK YOU for not doing an 'April Fools Day Joke' on us...I've had enough of them today
Commence read.
Twilight and Vinyl. Hm. Related. Seen that angle played a few times. Now what madness...?
Well... That escalated quickly...
Hmmm, this is becoming juicy. Well done, sir.
*clears throat* four-ways fix everything.
Things are getting rarity sized dramatic, and I'm loving every word of it!
Please... We can has more?
Mane Medic
Reading these comments made me
such a fine and delightfull chapter, though i owe a chick 10 bucks for thinking the ex of Rarity would be Dash or Aj.
wow what an ending !!! and what a mean cliff hanger !
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wasn't that scoots ?
"Twilight"
Dun
Dun
DUNNNN!!
I actually never expected it to be Twilight... this is gonna be intense...
Well I certainly did not see that coming. When you wrote about Rarity having a bad breakup I kind of assumed her ex was Applejack, don't know why but it worked in my head. Kudos to you Loyal for catching me completely off-guard with that curve ball, complete swing and a miss on my part. Now we see that drama pot really begin to boil, this ride will be anything but calm I'm sure. I for one can't wait to see what you have cooked up this time.
Holy. Fucking. Shit.
Ok, seriously, can things get any worse for Rarity at this point? I mean, god-damn it's like she jumped from the frying pan to the fire to the fucking pilot-light under the stove! I wanted to punch the shit out of Vinyl for talking to Octy the way she did, and then
LO AND BEHOLD
Twilight just had to show up and complicate shit even further!!
And I missed something, are Vinyl and Rarity both related to Twilight in this fic? Because, that would make them second cousins or something, which would make this a veritable cesspool of "awk-waaaaaaarrrrrrrrd.........."
Needless to say, I'm fucking pissed off at the turn of events, but in a good way, one that makes me want to keep reading to find out if Rarity PUNCHES THE FUCKING SHIT OUT OF VINYL FOR BEING A SNOBBISH LOW-LIFE BITCH!!!!!
*ahem*
Keep up the good work with the fic. Seriously, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Called it.
Ahhhh, I remember the fic in ADKoL: The Lost Chapters where I had requested Vinyl to show up at Maggie's. And how she and Twi were cousins. Good times.
In other news: Boy; that escalated quickly.
2362082
No, only Vinyl is related to Twilight. (Notice the similar color scheme between her and Shining Armor. White coat, blue mane with sky-blue highlights? Yeah, totally no relation there.)
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Ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Yeah, see, I pulled one of these while I was reading and got confused.
Thanks for clearing that up, mate.
2362082
Don't worry, they're not biologically related, so it's not weird at all.
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I had to, ok?
2362757
In a weird sort of way, your derp makes sense. I mean, sure, it's still a little awkward (the person can almost be seen as blood family), but in the end, it doesn't even matter, because they are two completely separate people who have no ties to each other, apart from them knowing each other for a long time, but that's how all the best romance ideas are created, right? A person has a childhood friend, they begin to see said friend in a new light, one thing leads to another and before you know it our guy (or gal, in this case) develops very intimate feelings for "childhood friend". Come to find out later that "childhood friend" has had similar feelings for much, much longer than anyone originally thought. So I guess I leave it to you to decide: bang or no bang?
2363598
And when you watch that childhood friend sleep at night, go skinny dipping and streaking with them, and when they leave, you take your vendetta out against other magical students by vaporizing them into nothing.
You know what they say, don't stick your dick in crazy.
Total bang.
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It's not
Creepy!
2363783
I actually friggin' love that song.
2363808
I've just been reading these comments over and over and I can't help but play through that episode in my head and sing along in a fit of giggles. This is too good.
well, I ws expecting the drama, but I was not expecting this much drama. I guessed that Octavia hadn't really broken up with Vinyl when she and Rarity... happened, and I'm sad that I was right. Because now the entire situation is shitty and nobody's happy, I want to hate Octavia but know I can't really, and I'm antsy for another update.
Retroactively, everything about the ex being Twilight makes sense, so good job on that.
But you might.. want to clarify who's speaking where in the whole "my ex" "my cousin" reveal, because I can totally see where people are getting confused with that.
You sir could have an excellent career of writing soap operas.
I had my suspicions it would be Twilight. Excellent work so far, keep it up!
I know I'm a little late (41 weeks late) but I just have to say: I already shipped Raritwi so that wasn't so much of a surprise, but Twilight and Vinyl are cousins?!?!?!?!?!?! HOLY BUCKING SHIT I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job, sir I'll favorite this definitely
I was expecting Dashie or Applejack, although I don't know this Twilight yet.