Abuse. Stress. Depression. Some of the nicest ponies in Equestria have experienced that. Their closest friends and family have ruined their life so much, the poor ponies don't know what to do anymore-mares and stallions alike. But now, the tables have turned. And the most innocent ponies are going in for the kill.
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2401863 They will be connected in later chapters. Seekers by Erin Hunter is basically how the chapters in the story will be like; first explaining their thirst for revenge by themselves, a few deaths here and there, then finding each other.~
Fleur turns on the light to see Fancy and (insert random mare here) bucking. Calling it now.
Now we just have to wait to see if I'm right. Any idea when ch5 will be out?
2430706 Lol, awesome guess, but I'm not telling you if you got it right or not. xP
Chapter Five is estimated to be... well, let's do some calculations. xD
Chapter One is finally finished~
Chapter Two will then most likely be edited, an estimated amount of nine days after.
Chapter Three will be finished in about ten days after and awaiting feedback needed to edit it more.
Chapter Four will be posted an estimated amount of twenty days after, awaiting feedback needed to edit it more.
Chapter Five approximately ten days after.
It'll be an ESTIMATED amount of 49 days before Chapter Five is posted. That's a VERY rough estimate, I'll add, it all depends on how busy I am.~
-Throat clear- Ehem. Correction again. Chapter One is now completely edited, please give feedback!
Alright so there are a few punctual errors other than that I don't see anything wrong with it, it was very descriptive and I really liked it
2492819 Thankies for your feedback. ^^ If you don't mind, could you point out some of the errors you noticed? That would help me a lot~
2492827 the one that's says everypony there should be a hyphen or space and your missing a few comas here and there but that's just about it
2492949 Actually, "everypony" is one word.
Mind pointing out those missing commas? xP
2492967 I don't really know how to make it specific
2492988 When replying/posting a comment, there's this bar above the space where you can type. It has the bold, italic, underline, etc. Copy one or more sentences from the story, then click the chat bubble button on the bar thing. Paste the sentence(s) in between the 2 seperate box things. xP
2493016 I understood none of what you just said
*Zypheros stood up, pulled his hat over his head, and slowly pulled out a throwing knife.*
THWAP!
*A picture of Berry Punch sits on the wall, the throwing knife at the very center of it.*
Yes. I like your ideas.