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Is Scamp related to the cannibal from the adoption chapter in anyway? Because like... she tore up The Queen's throat up like a pit-bull. The fight was fun though. The only nitpick I have is that Twilight only seemed to use the same spell over and over again.
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I loved writing that part xD
I had trouble figuring out how to do the fight, but I rationalized Twilight was more focused on toying with Scamp. But I definitely should of gave her some variety to her spell use.
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i think the whole one spell thing kinda makes it seem like she has been on the throne long enough and had so little resistence to her individualy that she has not felt the need to practice fighting in a while so she got sloppy. A Twilight that dealt with resistnce and kept up at least a light training scedual would have wiped the floor with scamp so its good that this twilight was full on crazy
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I actually really like that. I was going for a Twilight who was so powerful no one could rival her, so she became way over confident and thought of herself as the God of her world. That’s why Greg being able to match, if not not outmatch, her magical powers shocked her so hard that she fully let her guard down.
She can kill with a thought, so she always felt like she has nothing to fear from a normal pony.