After his birthday party, Spike sets out in search of a mysterious force that make him head into the Desert. On the other side of the desert, Amethyst gets the exact same feeling, and has to leave in search of the one that keeps talking to her in her mind. Spike and Amethyst, from that time on, will be ever linked in a way that neither of them could ever expect.
(Now considered "Alternate Universe")
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first! and this story sounds good so far, 'track'
Oh my god, keep more chapters coming, this is awesome!
I. Like. This. 'nuff said
This is such a promising concept, but it feel so RUSHED! If you were to slow it down I could give you 5 stars instead of 4 D:
O.O oooookay this could be awkward, i like the bucket of turnips reference
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Don't worry...the next part will be up soon...just have to finish Spike's side of the story first, and then I can publish it ...
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO POST!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
please may i have some more
Everything so far is going good with the story, and I think that there's at least two more chapters to tell.
There's not much sex there to require the sex tag, I don't even think there was any. Not much of a romance, or adventure. While it does have some qualities of those tags. It's a little bit to fast paced to actually be any of those. I think the story itself and the premise is good, but it needs working on. I'm just going to leave and maybe come back later.
Not trying to sound like I matter or that I'm being rude. I'm just trying to state somethings that I can see so far.
5597905 That...is a fair point...I was considering shifting a few of the tags around...so thanks for the help.
5597911 Again, not trying to sound rude or like I'm telling you what to do, the story is good, it just needs some work is all.
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Thank you for your feedback though. It's at least good to know you read it in the first place. Even if my work needs...um...work...I know that I can always get better.
When next chapter I enjoy this story with the romance between amethyst and spike