Discord teams up with the TF2 Announcer on the war-torn battlefield of Badwater Basin, and forces the Mane 6 to battle the TF2 team against their will. Curiosity gets the better of both teams, however, and they begin to wonder why they’re fighting in the first place.
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No gore, no obscenities, no shipping. Just plain, clean storytelling. The ponies don’t know where they are or how to fight. The teams aren't automatically “friends”. This story is about what I think would happen if the Mane 6 and TF2 Team suddenly met for battle.
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Chapters (4)
This, is, GREAT!
It put 2 of my favorite things together tf2 and mlp AMAZING
The last chapter was a bit confusing though.
Fluttershy and Heavy, match made in Badwater Basin.
I think it would have been funny if discord sent the entire game to equestria and then had the next fight there.
2174306 me too
First comment! I always win a race
8090278 pretty great but you wouldn't catch me with that backstabbin' scumbag spy. sure he's useful once in awhile but he's a coward and french too
(all my comments will be in the character of scout and my actual opinion will be in parantheses)
dumb ass ponies, why are they so colorful I hope there's not any rainbow ones.
(it was set up very nicely but is there no gore/pain like in tf2 so they don't notice they are dying and being brought back to life)
Somethin' tells me the Administrator met freakin' Merasmus and he did his magic thing to get ponies from another dimension.
I learned my lesson a while ago and if I don't question it I get another couple hats and the occasional new weapon. Still though, screw Merasmus and the Administrator for tormenting talkin' ponies, even if one of themselves rainbow and I almost broke down. It's not funny OK!
Who was that guy with the weird body who was floating?
I think this will end out great right?
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I was not expecting the mercs to quit. Great story overall. Well done