Discord teams up with the TF2 Announcer on the war-torn battlefield of Badwater Basin, and forces the Mane 6 to battle the TF2 team against their will. Curiosity gets the better of both teams, however, and they begin to wonder why they’re fighting in the first place.

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No gore, no obscenities, no shipping. Just plain, clean storytelling. The ponies don’t know where they are or how to fight. The teams aren't automatically “friends”. This story is about what I think would happen if the Mane 6 and TF2 Team suddenly met for battle.

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