Requiem For A Soldier

by Shieldheart204

The End of Peace

Chapter 13: The End of Peace

Princess Celestia saw as a party of nine people return to the library after about half an hour of their departure. Shining Armor was the one to open the door, letting a bruised Rainbow Dash inside. She was nursing her eye and cheek.

"What happened?" She asked as she approached them

Radiant Dawn was perched up on one of the top windows with her bow on her left hand and turned to look at them.

"Let me guess, he let you fire a forty-five cal without warning?" She asked as she jumped down from her post. A pair of translucent wings swung out from her back and helped cushion her fall.

Rainbow nodded her head.

"Icarus wings, impressive spell casting if I do say so myself." Said Twilight as she saw the wings disappear.

"How did you know the reason behind my friend's bruise?" Asked Rarity.

Dawn slung her bow on her back before answering. "Because you can say it's one of his traditions. Whenever he gives out a class he always forgets to tell people to check the dials. I'm sure he switches the dial on purpose because it usually happens at least to one person."

"I couldn't believe he would dare do something like that, he seemed very friendly!" Protested Rarity.

"He probably does it to test people. He's always checking to see if there are any potential allies. Speaking of which, who is this little woman you brought here along with you Miss Rarity?" Asked the archer as she crouched over to the pink and purple haired girl.

"She's my sister, Sweetie Belle. I was just picking her up from the Commissioner's house, he was kind enough to take care of her while we were here."

Dawn darted her look at Rarity. "Does he know about this meeting?"

"He doesn't know you are here, he just knows that I had to leave my sister behind."

The archer let out a sigh of relief. "Good, we can't let him figure out we're here."

"Why not?" Asked Applejack.

"Because he has a tendency of over thinking things. And he might suspect that my presence is some sort of sinister plot to force him to retire." Answered the princess. "Twilight, I'm going to have to ask you to please sign this form accepting the task of becoming his official handler."

She produced from under her cloak a parchment. The librarian grabbed it and started reading.

"I Twilight Sparkle agree to..." She reduced her volume to a mumble. "Respond to any damage he may cause during emergency assignments like: arson, destruction of private property, slaughter of animals or the misuse of any items the Commissioner may use to subdue the imminent danger that assault 'insert city name here' please refer to paragraph ten for list of acceptable dangers." She read for a couple of minutes before speaking again.

She soon set the document down and grabbed a quill from one of her drawers. After a quick signature she rolled up the agreement and handed it over.

She then noticed Dawn receiving a 50-bit bill from the white-haired militant.

The princess approached and whispered. "They took wagers or whether you would read the document or not."

.oOo.

Shield Heart looked around the train station and tapped his Parasprite gun. He was wearing his blue greatcoat above his guns, scale vest, bracers and tee shirt. He preferred if people stopped seeing him as a threat as soon as possible.

A couple of beads of sweat formed on his brow, which he removed with the sleeve of his coat. Then, his entire body started to sweat.

"How the hell can these locals withstand this heat?" He exclaimed to himself. Gun walked behind him and slapped him on the back.

"Maybe because they don't wear a heavy wool greatcoat."

"But I can't take it off because I need to hide my guns and I seem to have misplaced my other coat."

"Maybe you can ask Iron Hide for a new coat, probably like the ones they use in Appleoosa."

"Maybe I should. Who knows how the winter will be."

"Probably like Canterlot."

"Probably, but I'd rather suppose it will be warmer."

Shield soon looked to the distance and recognized the Commander. Shield rushed over to his superior and saluted him.

"At ease soldier" Shield immediately obeyed. " and unbutton your coat, I can't believe how you can survive with that thing heating you up."

"I'm afraid I can't do that sir." Responded Shield as he accompanied his officer to the station.

"And why is that, did you fuse the buttons shut?" Replied Iron with a chuckle. Shield undid the first three buttons and showed what he was wearing.

"This is why sir. I doubt the town will appreciate me walking around like this."

"Don't be absurd , if you unbutton your coat I doubt people will care you're wearing armor. And I doubt anyone will see your holsters. Just try to avoid jumping a lot."

"Yes sir! I can't even jump sir. Not with this brace at least."

"You have suffered far worse and have continued with your duties. One of the reasons you are here is for your recovery."

"And what are the rest of the reasons if I may know?" Inquired the commissioner with a smug grin.

The old warhorse sighed. "Are you sure you want to know?"

"I already have my theories, but I want to prove them right." Shield said with his ego running high.

"Then follow me." Said the elder. He turned to the gunsmith. "I trust you can handle the rest Gun."

"Of course sir." Responded the brown-haired man.

The Commander guided the blond away from the station in total silence and sat him in a table at the local café. Fortunately for Shield it was completely empty, not even the waiters were present.

"I hope you realize the trouble you're in. That stunt you pulled in the caves does not sit well with the evaluators back at HQ." said Iron as he sat down.

"But I got the job done!" Exclaimed Shield as he sat down and reclined forward, hoping to not bump onto his gun on his back. "The paper clearly stated that there were no rules of engagement."

"But that doesn't give you permission to slaughter part of the goblin population."

"They were the ones that opened hostilities first! I waited for them to attack! Hell, I even tried to reason with the king!" He replied as he put his feet on the table and leaned back.

"But because they swung a sword first you had to exterminate them? I am so disappointed in you. I thought this job would save you, but instead has forced my hand!" The commander pounded his fist on the table.

"Save me from what? I handled myself pretty good."

"I meant from the Council of Defense. They've been looking for an excuse to kick you out of both the Commission and the Legion. I gave you this particular assignment because I thought you could handle this cleanly and show them that even after your disaster in Manehattan you are still a valuable asset worth keeping."

"The COD has no idea how hard it was to reduce her power under the horrible restrictions they tried to impose. Had they been any lighter she would be three meters underground by now. But NOOO, you must keep the financial district intact, you can't explode the port, you can't attack the train station with police officers you will spread panic..." Said Shield in an insulting voice.

"I know they put limitations, but they did it because they seek Equestria's best interests."

"Equestria's best interests my ass. Vanhoover was worse and all it took was Free Will to command the state, Two Face to lead the police, Major War Machine to control the army, and no Rules of Engagement. And would you look at the result!" He exclaimed as he stood up and threw his hands into the air.

"We eliminated the Triads in two years. Manehattan has been dealing with the Cartel for FIVE years. Those fat cats are too busy thinking of their investments, they couldn't give a shit about safety." He snapped as he paced around his seat before sitting down.

"I would watch my tongue if I were you. I know how you feel, I'm with you, but you have to play it safe. They have the power to take you down and you don't. If you want to make things right we need evidence but most important of all." Said the commander. "I need you to play ball. Iron Fist is already doing what he can to take down the Precious Family, and I'm preparing my own team to clear them out from Canterlot.

"But if we are to get rid of the Armchair Generals we need evidence that they are somehow involved. I don't know anything else, but I can't rely on you if your presence unnerves everyone."

Shield sighed. "Why are you even trusting me? Those guys are your friends, and who am I? A monster with a pitch-black past. Why are you risking your life based on speculations made by me?"

"Because they have given me reasons to trust you and doubt them. Last meeting the Secretary of the Air Fleets was too eager to send off the third and fourth fleets to the San Palomino Desert, as if he's preparing for something. He talks about maneuvers and looking for the Sunken Library, but I fear he's weakening Fillydelphia too much. And don't even get me started on General Spearhead.

"He tried to order one of the Royal Guard Legions to go to the Neighagra falls, saying that the was evidence that a basilisk was nested there. Can you believe him?"

"I sense you didn't allow him to send them."

"Of course not that would be suicide, as if he had no regard for standard protocol."

"So is there any news on the Mystery Guitar Man Pearl is so keen on killing?"

The commander grunted before answering. "Don't even get me started on that. Not a day goes by that he fails to call me, insisting on making it a matter of national security."

"I could always talk to him. You know we are the best of buds."

"Yeah, because nothing says we are Best Friends better than an explosive banana pie to the face."

"Why does everyone keep bringing that up? I swear, I have several incidents. Remember the time he went out hunting and I smuggled meat into his horse's pockets? The dude never knew what hit him when he released the hounds and they attacked him." He chuckled before continuing.

"Then that time I poisoned the bread with laxatives and the Follow-me potion? That was hilarious seeing him run away from the pigeons he was feeding as they shit all over him. I remember he then ordered the pigeon population be trimmed."

"I sometimes worry about you Shield."

"I'd be more worried about this place. It really looks like a place where I could easily get bored." Shield said with an evil chuckle. "Was this plan your idea? Because if it is you've changed your style."

"Grounding you here? No that was Princess Celestia's idea. She took inspiration from her apprentice and thought it would be a good idea to put you here."

"So even she is behind this conspiracy. I wondered just how deep the rabbit hole went." Shield mumbled.

"She's only trying to help you. Ever since you joined the legion she's noticed you haven't been the same."

"That's 'cause shit hasn't been the same. Eleven years ago nobody had to worry about high crime rates or drugs or any of that bullshit."

"No, we've always had to deal with that. You just decided to grow up faster and got scarred."

"Yet I'm someone you need. You need someone who has been scarred by reality, someone who has seen the most horrible corners of this world and has emerged. And there is no one who has been through half of what I have experienced."

"Don't elevate yourself, we want you to work with us and that's it. You are not some crucial piece to our puzzle of greatness or something like that." Snapped the commander. "You are here because of your actions. Also you will direct any concerns to Twilight Sparkle, from today onward she will be your official handler."

The man got up and started walking away. "Please don't make her life difficult, she already has a lot of work being the princess's apprentice."

Shield burst out laughing. "Trust me sir, with me around her last concern should be her studies."

Comments

[Lord Umber]

I feel highly interested to know where you got that cover picture

[Shieldheart204]

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I found it on DeviantArt, I put the artist's link in the description. The guy has some of the best humanized artwork I've ever seen.

[1000Fights]

If his is as good a GentlemanJ's Journey of the Graves series, I will give you a medal.

[Shieldheart204]

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Wow, that's a lot of pressure you're putting on me. I'm no pro, but I'll do my best to meet these expectations.

[1000Fights]

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What this says!

[Shieldheart204]

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Thanks man, I really appreciate it. This is the first time anyone has said anything like it. Now I know I MUST work hard. I was starting to lose my edge on this series.

[Shieldheart204]

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I see you like guns... I think you'll love the Steel Legion

[dark_zero]

very good your stories

the character is cynical and crazy like me (remember to dante)

it's a shame you to cancel some of your stories

but I will continue reading your stories

luck and do not give up you have talent

practice a little more and you will be one of the best

greetings from Mexico City

[Shieldheart204]

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A chilango, I see…

Equestrian Steel and Octavarium Creed got cancelled because I rebooted them into Requiem for a Soldier and The Magic of Music respectively. I felt they were poorly written and were too convoluted, so I had to axe them.

Thanks for your support! Greetings from Guadalajara!

[RainbowJack2000]

That cover page.... dayum....

Therefore it shall be read!!!

[pvtspoon]

Hi! So, I'm kinda late but I thought I would drop a line anyway! I find this when a found the sequel and I noticed you ask for opinions so I thought I'd give you mine!

I don't like it.

There is so many strikes I can't even explain them all, so lets go with a list!

1. Firearms- they have magic, enhanced strength, and weather control, why would they need guns?

2. Cars/ automobiles- they just got trains if I understand the show correctly, so how do the have ATVs and limos?

3. Op as fuck- this guy can easily defeat goblins by the truck load and dozens of changelings? So where was this guy when all the other problems were happening, like Nightmare Moon or the invasion of Canterlot?

4. Changelings- I was excited to see goblins in the beginning but then you pulled out changelings. That is just lazy, like pulling out the old manticore of cockatrice. A cheap enemy that everyone has used to the point that they have become boring.

Well there's four things. There are others but I didn't want to list everything I found a problem with, just a few of them so I didn't waste to much of you time.

[Shieldheart204]

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I see someone posting constructive critisism
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Critisism in never late, but it is welcome as soon as possible.

So allow me to go point by point and try to explain my creative decisions.
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1. Because why not?
Joking aside: Because even with magic, there are people who don't have magic and need to defend themselves. Also, mages can run out of juice, and with Murphy's Law in effect it means that they will run out of juice whenever they need it the most. So that's why there are guns powered by magic, Equestria actually has a ban on solid projectile throwers, something you could read in the sequel, but there are still various problems that cannot be resolved by the use of the elements. Strength enhancements actually come at a short-term price, as you read Shield lost his lunch because of this, so there's little reason to go Hulk whenever there's a bully in town. You'd die from magic poisoning.

2. This is partly to maintain aesthetics. Trains are still the best way to go around, and all cities have strict controls over what motor vehicles are allowed. Canterlot doesn't have any sorts of cars because it would conflict with its image of a medieval/baroque city. The other part is going to be described in point 5.

3. I will admit, he is slightly OP. Yes, just slightly, his last incarnation was OP as fuck. But not this one. The only reason he killed so many goblins was because either gravity or their own love for explosions did most of the work for him. As with the changelings, they still managed to injure him somewhat, he didn't get tetanus just from the trolls. Also, this is the guy who doesn't care if he lives or dies so long as his actions in some way help his friends. He nearly got killed because of it. Also, he's been fighting since he was fifteen years old. He's just really good at it and he loves it, its his addiction.
So, we know Celestia wanted to save Luna, but if she dispatched Shield there would have been one of two likely outcomes:
1. He dies: I'm serious, he can't take down an angel (human equivalent of alicorn) whose gone
Oversoul ( Nightmare mode) unless he has an entire army of veterans at his side. To me
goblins are low-level cannon fodder, something he's used to killing.

2. Nightmare Moon dies, along with Princess Luna: There's no reason as to why Celestia
couldn't have killed her if it meant saving her sister. So why send a lunatic who will do
everything to kill her?
Concerning the wedding: Vanhoover is the city where he lived before his mission, and that is two days away if you travel by train (One if it's a bullet train and six hours by plane but that shit is expensive.) Remember, he was mad because no one told him that they were getting married so it's not like he could have just popped in and have become a Deus Ex Machina.

4. Yeah, I'll give you the full point in this one. The only reason as to why they are there is because of an aborted arc in which Changelings would attempt an all-out invasion on Manehattan (Which was the main plot point in Equestrian Steel and that was shit.) I would change it but I can't slow down, I'm too busy thinking of how Twilight will end up fighting ogres that act like the orks in warhammer 40k. The Changelings are at the bottom of my villains list, below Evil PMCs and Smith Lord of Boardor

5. I wanted to distance myself from the actual canon (henceforth the AU tag) because I wanted to imagine my own Equestria. Horses have little need for vehicles because they are used as vehicles by humans. Humans have been forced to evolve their methods of transportation to make them as efficient as possible. So, at least for me, it's more logical if humans stopped using horses and began developing cars and stuff. There are still those (Appleloosa Rangers and Canterlot Royal Guard) that use horses in combat even if it's just for the sake of tradition.

6. As to elaborate even further in the guns department, it comes tied to being a human. Ever since our beginning we have tried our best to create more efficient ways to exterminate our fellow man, and Equestrians have had to deal with it and learn how to defend themselves. I didn't want to create a universe that was Ponyverse with humans, I wanted to imagine Equestria if it was made by humans.

If you could take the time and write down that would be great. I like the occasional praise but I love it when they challenge my story. It makes me really think back and question if I have done a good job. I usually have an explanation for everything that happens but I just don't want to give you the info. I think people enjoy it if they realized it themselves.

So anyways, thanks for your time and if you have any rebuttals I really don't mind. In fact I would love it.

[pvtspoon]

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You-you respected my opinion on your story when it wasn't glowing praise...

I'm, I'm sorry. I'm just so happy..

Anyway, I won't argue with any of the points you made as you are the author and I suppose as such you should be able to take some artistic freedoms. Most of my arguments about your counter points are mainly flimsy and fall into element of harmony and friendship territory. I think we can agree those don't make for exciting battles and the fact that the cast is human does actually seem like it would affect that so I guess we can chalk this up to personal tastes!

[Shieldheart204]

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Wait, were you expecting me to be a dick about your comment?

If that's the case, then what kind of author would I be? It's criticism like yours that helps me improve as an author. Granted its not easy to have my story under fire, but if someone doesn't tell me why it sucks I won't be able to improve. I'd just be stuck writing mediocre stories.

I will admit, my stories are more for a niche market and definitely not for everyone. I have to accept that not everyone will glorify me. But rather than skulk and grunt I would rather learn why people don't like it. Maybe most are just haters, but if I turned away every single negative comment I'll end up writing worse than Stephen Meyer (Or some other mediocre author).

So in the end, Thanks!

[pvtspoon]

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I... Seem to have a bad habit of criticizing authors who are of the mind set that if I don't like it, I can go stick it where the sun don't shine. So, when I do get an author that appreciates my opinion instead of insulting my intellect, questioning my sexual preference, or being dismissive to the point of being callous, it makes me feel warm in fuzz inside. As to date, I think you are only the second or third who have replied with something positive. And that's not to say everyone I commented to were rude, just most of the authors whose story's I found fault with.

[Shieldheart204]

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Not really... And neither does Shield

[Iroh Legoman]

5294639. Oh ok.