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Flash Sentry has just moved to Canterlot High, his parents having gone overseas for an archaeological expedition, and is about to live a year in an unknown school where hopefully he can just live by. And for that he has the company of the dorm's manager and the head school nurse: Cadence.

But his life won't be as easy, not while there are six girls with plans of their own and in need of someone to help them make their objectives a reality, whether he likes it or not....

Then there's Discord, the mysterious man from his dreams, and Wondercolt, an unknown character from Harmonyspace. Their constant appearances will be a distraction from daily life and maybe even add a touch of danger to an otherwise normal life.

Cover art and editing courtesy of MythrilMoth

Chapters (3)
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Who else saw the persona 5 trailer today. This has nothing to do with the story but I am so psyched for it

Were the two girls at the beginning OCs? Just curious.

A Persona crossover? I am intrigued. Do continue.:twilightsmile:

4968777 and now about the story. This mite be the first Persona crossover that actually interest me. I like the mix between Persona 3 & 4. I can't wait for when Flash awakens and what persona he has. Good job

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You seem to be rather ok with the fact that Flash has the role of Protagonist, not that I'm complaining. Don't worry, he'll get his persona soon enough.

I'm going to follow this story because it intrigues me, but let me give you some advice: stay on your guard. The plot of Persona games are very rich and detailed, you need to stay on top of this or the entire thing may crumble.

I don't know why, but I can't help but read Discord and Derpy's parts in Igor and Margaret's voices.

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It's a heavy burden to live up to the quality, I won't try to deny it. This is actually why I had this in the pre-planning can for a year and I didn't want to start unless I had an editor to help me out. Also keeping quality in mind, I will be updating once a month.

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Really? I thought that Derpy would have Elizabeth's voice.

4975488 Maybe it's because I was playing P4 today.

4975483 Well good, as long as your taking this seriously. I had a plan to do something like this:
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It was going to be called "My little Persona" and basically be the retelling of Persona 4 but with MLP characters, with an OC as Yu and the CMC featuring prominently. It would take some time though...hey, maybe when you're done with this you can help me co-write it?

Hm... Flash Sentry as the blank-state protagonist in Persona? It fits really well, actually.

Hopefully, though, he has enough character to him to have some interesting stuff going on for him here.

This first chapter seems a little rushed, unfortunately. I don't get a good sense of flow from scene to scene, nor do I get a sense of how Flash reacts to the new characters he's meeting. However, the role of Discord as Igor, and the pre-friendship Twilight... and the nice spread of background ponies and side characters is pretty nice.

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Yeha, originally I had planned on making Twilight the protagonist. But after some discussion it felt like a no-brainer. Don't worry about him, I'll make sure he gets enough character to be interesting in of himself.

Cancelled? Already? I gotta say, I expected more from you.

5102473 I can explain that.

I'm going to be taking over this story, mainly because I have more time to write, have more experience with Persona, and can generate material at a more expedient pace. It'll be a couple of weeks before I restart this story, but I'm going to launch it with at least 4-5 chapters ready to be released at intervals.

This will free Shieldheart up to work on stories that aren't quite as much work and strain as a Persona crossover...which is a TREMENDOUS undertaking. :twilightblush:

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Yeah, I know. But considering that it took me a full year to crank out these two chapters, I admit that I'm just not that competent a story-writer as a story like this needs me to be. It's for the best, you guys deserve a decent Persona crossover, and MythrilMoth is bound to give you something incredible.

What the hell. And I was looking foreword to an awakening. You can't have a Persona crossover without Personas

5103223 I'm sorry I did not read the other comments

5102896 You need practice, but I think you'll get better in time. I may have to give you something off my project planner list as a trade for Persona EG. Or a general writing prompt. :raritywink:

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5103239 I think you'll like what I've got going. I want to have anywhere from five to eight chapters written and ready to go before I publish. Give me about 2 to 3 weeks; I'm gonna publish the first five chapters all in one big dump, then move on to daily or every 2 days releases.

5107236 Will these chapters be under your name or Shield's?

5109725 It'll be under my name. I'm completely taking over the story. I've already written the first three chapters. I'll probably start releasing late next week or early the week after. I haven't entirely worked out the release schedule yet, but I will have at least eight chapters ready to roll by the time I officially publish the story. My partner Zef is already working on Persona illustrations. His sketch of Flash's starting Persona is nothing short of incredible.

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Once it's inked and colored and shaded and cleaned up in photoshop, it's going to look like it came right out of the games.

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5102896 We're in business. Expect a chapter a day, I've already got 8 chapters written.

Well at least Time Turner won't make any bad puns like Ikutsuki.

But looking forward for next chapters later on.

5121281 Psst...you'll have to go over here for that.

Chapter One Reading is now up!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Bruh deleted Jun 2nd, 2016
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