• Member Since 17th Dec, 2011
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Xaxus


Ponies, eh?

Comments ( 20 )

This story has true potential, but be careful writing it. As a fan of all things RPG, I love the theme, and the way the story plays out as if from a player's perspective. One thing I'm not to fond of is the substance use, but I'm not one to judge. To each their own, I suppose, but please try not to let it get out of hand. I did read your disclaimer, so I will just grin and bare it with no further discussion of the topic. I will also note that it became somewhat rushed t'wards the end, so watch out for that. I shall withhold my rating until more is written, but you have earned a track. I eagerly await the next portion of 'my' adventure!
-A Very M.A.D. Man

Ahh, its always good to see a fellow pot-head in this brony community:ajsmug:

As for the story, I think it has a very interesting style. I've never been on homestuck or whatever before so this is kinda new to me and it makes the story more interesting.

I hope you continue the story, its a fresh new take on 2nd person fics.

P.s. the chronic of narnia? Sounds dank as hell bro, ima score some chronic bud and call it that:pinkiehappy:

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Aye, I feel as though we're a rare breed.
Even if we're not.
I appreciate the comment and the track, and I'll do what is in mah power to keep you interested and entertained as the next scene of Dankworld flies by.

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Hey man, I thank you very much for the input (as I need all I can get), yet I am not certain that I can help you with the substance use. After all, this is the world of dank.
But only time will tell.
Thank ye kindly for the track and the review, and be sure to keep a lookout for the next scene of your adventure.

Awww yeah. Our text message game turned into something epic, and then put on one of my very favorite websites.

I approve so hard.

Totally gonna co-write this, if I may. The clop scenes are mine, ya hear? Though I am game to see your style.

Brace yourselves, readers, this is a pretty awesome story.

awesome story bro! i laughed my ass of when i read the chronic of Narnia!:rainbowlaugh: keep it up! 5 stars

pure epicness.

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Dank you, my good man; expect the coming chapters to be even better.

Indeed, my good sir, indeed.

i enjoyed it, it seems to be getting better :pinkiesmile:

Just you wait, this story still has so much plot to thicken, you have no idea.

Fuck yea. We're off to see the pony! The wonderful pony named Twilight!
...alright, show's over, I'm tired.

Good job, Phom. I enjoyed me some o dis.

i prefer your style to xaxus's, no offence to him.

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I do too; he is much more experienced than I. Glad you like what's up, though. :3

Haw thank ya sugahcube. Er, sugahcubes.

Oh wow, this story has more likes than dislikes...
That's pretty cool: "Hng I don't like this story, I'm just gonna dislike it without offering any feedback as to why"

Fuck the police. This was great. *brohoofs Phom and Xax*

The difference in likes to dislikes is befuddling. I thought that this was a good story with some points for originality, even though it's HiE. I'd appreciate it if you were to brush up some minor errors. Unlike some others, I look foward to the continuation of Spencer and his wacky world of wavable inflated flailing tube ponies. :D

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