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The Forgotten King

Total Eclipse wakes up in a basement with no memories. But his past is right behind him, and he must help the Mane Six get their Elements back. He must learn to trust them, for the day is fast approaching when he will have to face his past, and defeat Him.

Chapters (3)

Who am I/How I got my ass kicked by every Element · 6th Mar 2013 · 2,500 words
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Who I am/What? · 4th Apr 2013 · 1,058 words
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Cancelled · 3rd Nov 2013 · 37 words
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Bronythegreat

Bronythegreat #1 · Mar 7th, 2013 · · · Who am I/How I got my ass kicked by every Element ·

Cool story idea, but seriously, slow down. You need to fin a particularly brav editor ( not me) and re-write tis chapter. I'll stick with it cause it looks like it has potential.

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