Scootaloo is best pony. I'm from Mississippi. I like all kinds of stuff. This is all.
Edit: I'm sorry I forgot to give this a teen tag, whoops. Well I'm sorry for those of you expecting this to be a everyone kind of story.
Apple Bloom and Scootaloo have grown up and have begun to date each other. However, trials and tribulations meet the duo as the past comes to the present. Not only will they have to deal with past demons, but also new ones. With the help of their friends and family, they're going to have to overcome every obstacle.
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Seems like an interesting idea, I'd just suggest getting an editor. I notice several misspellings of words though I still knew what you meant. For example I think you meant Sweetie Belle hopped over and quit should be quiet.
2062876 Oh okay thanks I'll go fix those
it was ok but plz dont turn it into a clopfic
2064053 Don't worry that won't happen, but it will probably have a few things talking about sex when Applebloom and Scootaloo talking so I'll warn you. You can decide whether something is not suitable for you, I'm not gonna force you to read it.
o thank celestia
2064132 but I will warn you that some conversations will not be family friendly.
Hey Rebel! So I do like the story and I am interested to see more.
There are some formatting/grammar mistakes you should be aware of. One of them is that it is "Apple Bloom," not "Applebloom" (I had to learn this the hard way with my first fic, LOL). There are others and I can PM you later with those if you would like. 
2065003 That would be nice thinks, also I suppose I'll do it as two words instead of one I can go in and do edits.
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If you have MS Word or OpenOffice, pasting it into there and doing a "replace all" will save a lot of time. And you're welcome! I'll send you some edits when I have a chance, probably tomorrow night.
2065099 Alright I'll look forward to it
Oh I like thos chapter x3 you use Babs accent from Bad_Seed_72 fanfics ;D Nice!~ I like this fic, I am to shy to use Babs accent in my fics cus I dont want people to see me as a copycat but now when two writers use that accent maybe I can aswell... If thats alright
2120525 That's fine of course when you introduce yourself to other authors and fics sometimes you somewhat adopt a style.
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Its always alright to adopt styles?
Ohh thats why so many fics seems smiliar sometimes 
Heheh
2123142 I think so until someone says otherwise, But Bad_Seed did change the original wording a bit
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Alrighty