We all know Applebloom was born in Ponyville, and that the second crusader is living with her sister. But how did Scootaloo get to the humble town of Ponyville? Well it's a little known story that goes something like this...
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Not bad, at least you did not rush the actual writing part. SO keep going
2064291 Thanks! And yeah I'm a pretty slow paced writer so I hope it turns out at least readable lol
I'd say this is a hidden gem sadly... Anyway MOAR since this is not AU I'm interested in how she ends up back in Ponyville.
2107389 Ya I'm thinking of making this an AU fic because an idea popped into my head on how I can build from this story to a couple other stories, but I'll have to work out some details first. And yes I know so far it seems kinda sad so far, but things will get much happier soon I promise
a few small spelling errors here and there.
The personalities of the ponies seemed to change rather swiftly for my taste, an almost amateurish personality change, but that line from Soaring Sky in the final lines makes me wonder if you've got a bigger plan in mind to explain it.
I'm going to fave this and see where you go with it.
2118161 I apologize for any spelling errors, I don't have anyone proofreading this for me. I just hand write it then type it up. But anyways yeah I feel like I kinda rushed things a little towards the end there, but trust me the next chapter is going to explain that situation a lot better. Side note: The whole Mr.Sherbert rhyme thing was really just me practicing for potential Zecora appearances in the next fic I intend to write, but I feel like I was having to force it so I might change how he is presented in later chapters. Anyways thanks for the read and please let me know if you have any ideas on how to improve
Well it's finally here! I apologize for the long wait I've been quite busy lately. As always please let me know if there are any improvements you'd like to see made, and if you have any complaints do let me know!
MOAR!
wow!!! that was awsom!! we want MOAR!!!
“Of course I can! Oh umm… I mean… I’ll try my best.” Scootaloo could see his cheeks getting red, ut she shrugged it off as him simply being shy."
you missed the 'b' in 'but' just somthing i saw. great story!!!! keep on writing!!!! love it!!!
2490120 Thanks for the feedback, I'll fix it right away! *Insert Rainbow Dash salute here*
If Manehatten is that hateful, then why aren't there wendigoes attacking?
2593352 Although there is extreme disharmony in Manehatten, there are still enough ponies working together to keep things such as the climate and social order. Unlike, to the best of my knowledge, when the wendigos sacked the land of old Equestria when there was no effective sense of unity among the tribes, or even within them. Hope that clarifies things!
Interesting as this has to be a whole different take on the whole "scoota-life" story. Is this going to ever be updated as this is turning into a really good story and it'll be a shame for another good story to go the "dead story" graveyard.
-frost
3980710 Sorry I'm trying, but I ran into a problem. Originally I was trying to make this story as canon with the original show as possible, and the first few chapters still fit pretty well. But for what I had panned there was no way to reach this goal after all the new episode releases. After hand-writing and rewriting nearly the entire story three times already, I've decided to buck the system and completely forego being canon. So with that out of the way I should be able to get some updates up soon.
When new chapter? Me kinda worry no more is coming.
4288399 Don't worry next chapter is written and proofread, I was just hoping to wait a little bit longer until my new cover art (Commissioned by the talented Pridark) is done.
But if it isn't done by the end of next week, I'll probably just publish the next chapter anyways 
4296021 As long as I know there is more, I can wait. I usually unfavorite stories that are dead. that makes me lose interest. I'm happy there is more coming.
A one year update? Uh.... I have not clicked on it yet but for that I would have written a recap to go along with this, cause I'm gonna have to re read this now.
4297828 Wow it has been a year huh? Sorry life kinda sneaked up on me and this story may hove gotten shoved into the broom closet... In a hole... that someone built a house on top of... and proceeded to move into said house...
Anywho I've finally gotten school/work stuff put into order, I've got a good start on the admin stuff I've been working on, so I figure it's about time I start writing stuff of my own instead of just helping other people with their writing 
(PS Glad to see you even still have this favorited! You were like one of the first people to even read it
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4297886 Correction, according to statistics the 4th
And I tend not to unfave things, especially good tales 
4297890 Bah humbug statistcs are overrated anyways! Not like I don't constantly look at them after I post something... nope I would never do that...
4595854 So basically I have a really good idea here, I just presented it poorly x3 Yep pretty much the story of my life. It's good to hear that I did something right though. I think I've improved my characterization in my second story, and I've definitely improved my narration. But I see I definitely have my work cut out for me if I want to be considered a good writer
Thanks for the review, I'll see what I can do!