Now, I have always been sort of anti Lunestia, but this was amazing. Although, the flashback kinda prevented me from enjoying the last scene, but it gave a great contribution to the plot. Defiantly the best Celestia x Luna I have read, and I look forward to a... Celunalight? Twilunestia? Whatever a Twilight x Celestia x Luna threesome is
I just love how you managed to make a clopfic with everypony basically in-character. That's not Molestia here, that's Celestia - an extremely awkward Celestia, sure, but Celestia still. Luna and Twilight (I just love how innocently she asks for an incest threesome xD) are pretty well-written too.
Waiting for the next chapter - even if it takes a month :p
Aah, Princest from one of my all time favourite clopwriters. Very enjoyable, and I loved how Celestia did not jump into it, it made it all so much sweeter. I wish I could give more than a blankly positive comment, but- other than some sentences that might have been more fluent if altered, I didn't catch anything. Very enjoyable feelings and atmosphere. Glad to see you're back!
Hah. Loved the bit with Twilight admitting that, what with her loving Celestia, she found her sister to be pretty cute. ...One wonders how the threesome will be brought up/go. Should be interesting anyways.
1107860 Glad you pushed through all of those chapters so thoroughly, and that you enjoyed it so. I already have some ideas in mind, but I'm not sure when I'll get to writing them down yet. At least it's not as much as a cliffhanger as last time!
1160203 I actually ate a slice of cheesecake when I was writing the outline for this chapter. Kind of had fun eating it too. Not THAT kind of fun, but, you know... I enjoyed it. >.>
I love the askprincessmolestia tumblr! These stories are a dream come true. I love your stories, but I wish you had kept to the "real" Molestia. Molestia doesn't care who you are, she will molest your ass. Besides that you have done an excellent job writing these stories. I can not wait for the rest.
1907965 Yes that Molestia is very entertaining. But even in JJ's comics, you'll see that every now and then he showcases her showing her weak moments (especially when Luna visited her dreams and explored her psyche). Those are the ones that really stuck with me and I thought it might make a more compelling story about how her duty as a princess and her insatiable sex drive are constantly at battle. I've read another fic based on the Molestia tumblr that more accurately portrayed her more comical and depraved side... it just wasn't as entertaining to me.
Not directly related to this story which has been quite amusing so far, but if you are enjoying both of the princesses in JJ's comic check out M0re than Gam3rs. It is primarily about Luna and Derpy, but Molestia does make a few appearances.
@Cloperella This is in my opinion the best interpretation of the comic in story form.
When I saw "changlings" and Luna wasn't using her magic at breakfast, I thought Luna had been replaced. But, then I saw her raise the moon and just thought: Then why wasn't she using her magic? The whole 'tired' thing sounded made up and hastily too.
wow
waitin' for next
1083000
I... I just put this one out! You already want the next one!?
Now, I have always been sort of anti Lunestia, but this was amazing. Although, the flashback kinda prevented me from enjoying the last scene, but it gave a great contribution to the plot. Defiantly the best Celestia x Luna I have read, and I look forward to a... Celunalight? Twilunestia? Whatever a Twilight x Celestia x Luna threesome is
1083008
We're a demanding bunch aren't we?
Who knew an erotic story about incest could have a heart-warming spin to it? Also,
>The Chronicles of Princess Molestia
>"Molestia" actually doesn't care much for all the sexual misadventures
Well'p.
1083163 I say Twilunestia. Kind of rolls off the tongue... Like Luna's sweet vag.
1083227 I guess I can understand. If I'd have managed my time a bit better, I probably could have been halfway done with the next chapter by now.
1083395 Yeah, kind of funny how that's worked out, isn't it? She's more of a victim of her own desires rather than a pursuer.
its not over yet is it i hope not. o and three way damn it make it i wanna see.
Let their be more! Please!
1083008 welcome to the Internet.
sadness... it cant be over more plese?
If it'd been up to me... there would have been more hours put into this... but writer is boss
God, Celestia's got alot of 'work' ahead of her, no?
1084122 I wouldn't just end it like that. I'd hopefully give the story a very worthy... climax.
1084537 I know, but I had to get it out before too long. I think we did a great job.
1084692 Being a princess isn't an easy job.
I just love how you managed to make a clopfic with everypony basically in-character. That's not Molestia here, that's Celestia - an extremely awkward Celestia, sure, but Celestia still. Luna and Twilight (I just love how innocently she asks for an incest threesome xD) are pretty well-written too.
Waiting for the next chapter - even if it takes a month :p
Aah, Princest from one of my all time favourite clopwriters.
Very enjoyable, and I loved how Celestia did not jump into it, it made it all so much sweeter.
I wish I could give more than a blankly positive comment, but- other than some sentences that might have been more fluent if altered, I didn't catch anything. Very enjoyable feelings and atmosphere.
Glad to see you're back!
WOOH!!
1083008
I like to stay a few steps ahead so I was actually waiting for the next story 3 stories ago. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png
>mfw expecting next chapter
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i dont say that you should do another one right now. just keep doing more
Hah. Loved the bit with Twilight admitting that, what with her loving Celestia, she found her sister to be pretty cute. ...One wonders how the threesome will be brought up/go. Should be interesting anyways.
I really enjoyed this! Can't wait for any further installments. MY BODY IS READY.
1107860 Glad you pushed through all of those chapters so thoroughly, and that you enjoyed it so. I already have some ideas in mind, but I'm not sure when I'll get to writing them down yet. At least it's not as much as a cliffhanger as last time!
I practically SHAT MY PANTS when I found out this had been updated.
1150144 Well, not the kind of mess I had in mind, but... close enough!
1160203 I actually ate a slice of cheesecake when I was writing the outline for this chapter. Kind of had fun eating it too. Not THAT kind of fun, but, you know... I enjoyed it. >.>
1083008
1083000 <- what he said!
1245533
That's rich.
If I were best friends with JJ, Gamer Luna would have her blog separate from Princess Molestia, and I'd still be following it
1245927
I see your point.
161038
HA!!!!!!!!
aww more clop
Twilight proposes threesome...
yes. Yes. YES...
THE END
WHYYYYYYYYYYYY
1896705
I'll make another chapter, I promise! Twilight just might have her fantasy come true!
1902771
I can assure you that it isn't theft. How similar is it to the other story? Could you provide me with a link please?
I love the askprincessmolestia tumblr! These stories are a dream come true.
I love your stories, but I wish you had kept to the "real" Molestia. Molestia doesn't care who you are, she will molest your ass.
Besides that you have done an excellent job writing these stories. I can not wait for the rest.
1907965
Yes that Molestia is very entertaining. But even in JJ's comics, you'll see that every now and then he showcases her showing her weak moments (especially when Luna visited her dreams and explored her psyche). Those are the ones that really stuck with me and I thought it might make a more compelling story about how her duty as a princess and her insatiable sex drive are constantly at battle.
I've read another fic based on the Molestia tumblr that more accurately portrayed her more comical and depraved side... it just wasn't as entertaining to me.
1907965
Not directly related to this story which has been quite amusing so far, but if you are enjoying both of the princesses in JJ's comic check out M0re than Gam3rs. It is primarily about Luna and Derpy, but Molestia does make a few appearances.
@Cloperella
This is in my opinion the best interpretation of the comic in story form.
Ur stories were amazing an I hope to read more :)
An I to have a thing for princess Luna ;)
How did you get the idea to make cake perverted? CAKE!!!!!! Of all things, why CAKE?!!!!!!!
>Only when Celestias hooves touched the ground
This needs an apostrophe
>pressed up against the alicorns chest
So does this
>her big sisters stomach
And this
>She’s is my little sister!
She is is?
>she moved her head to one of her sisters rump
wat ._.
>hold her little sisters lower body
Do you even apostrophe?
>bringing it swiftly down across her sisters rump
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>Keep on clopping!/i]
You buggered it up!
Thou must update!
It has been a while :).
When I saw "changlings" and Luna wasn't using her magic at breakfast, I thought Luna had been replaced. But, then I saw her raise the moon and just thought: Then why wasn't she using her magic? The whole 'tired' thing sounded made up and hastily too.