What didn't you like about it if you don't mind telling me? I'm planning on going back and revising it some time, so as long as it doesn't change the story I'd love to hear some feedback and apply it.
Bad in the sense that all porn is bad. (No exceptions!) I don't want to give you the impression that I didn't enjoy reading it, but seriously, when was the last time you watched/read porn that had even an attempt at a serious plot of any sort that didn't turn into a total cheese-fest?
This is not to say that there's not good porn (or clopfics, in this case), there's porn that, on a scale of "pr0n" to "Gentlemen's Entertainment" ranks right up there. I'd never submit it to a literary magazine, though. (and not just because it's got "adult" content) There's something weird about porn that causes a bit of a breakdown in developing something grand, something sweeping or epic.
Basically, there's porn that's and there's porn that's and there's porn that's ...and naturally there's some porn that's
This one is none of those. This clopfic easily hits with a bit of
If this were a movie, it'd be a popcorn flick. You go to watch it and enjoy it and feel you've gotten your money's worth (however much you spent on it) but maintain no illusions about whether it'd win an Academy Award or not.
Keep in mind that I (and the rest of the world) KNOW that the Michael Bay (MORE AWESOME!) Transformers movies are bad, but I still like going to see them. The G.I. Joe movie was BAD, but I still enjoyed the experience...so long as I could pause it periodically to keep from getting sick from the excess of 'SPLOSIONS!!!
tl;dr version - Don't change anything, I'm just ejaculating all over the response posts.
Oh, you mean "campy" or "cheesy". Yeah, I'm okay with that. The only one I was trying to be semi-serious on was chapter 2 just with the scene where Twilight talks Celestia out of her depression.
714083 OH MY GOSH, HAVEN'T HEARD FROM YOU IN FOREVER
Because, not everyone appreciates kinkier fetishes. And I just wanted to reduce the amount of "what the fuck did I just read?" comments that I'd inevitably get.
Eh, I've read weirder on Topless Robot. If Fievel shitting everywhere in Mickey Mouse's house while finding sexual gratification in it won't scare me away, Molestia forcing Fluttershy to lap up her piss won't faze me either.
Flutterrape?
Sexy.
Was a bit surprised at the included images, but they fit nicely.
Read this when it was first uploaded on pastebin, liked it then, liked it now.
And poor Fluttershy, left hanging!
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So glad I'm not getting hell for this so far. I was nervous about uploading this. Thank you.
I really like this chapter! (I haven't read the other chapters yet.)
Once I read "she had acquired a new sensation in it’s place," I thought the princess was going to clop too.
Also, I gave it a thumbs up & favorited it.
haha raped by fluttershy
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Thank you so much, it means a lot to me (why are there no smiling Fluttershy emotes?).
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Wouldn't be the first time.
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You're welcome. (I guess whoever made the emotes thought the yay one was the only one with her happy that was needed.)
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oh celestia you naughty filly. i wonder how twi is gonna deal with this sudden intrusion.
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What didn't you like about it if you don't mind telling me? I'm planning on going back and revising it some time, so as long as it doesn't change the story I'd love to hear some feedback and apply it.
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Bad in the sense that all porn is bad. (No exceptions!) I don't want to give you the impression that I didn't enjoy reading it, but seriously, when was the last time you watched/read porn that had even an attempt at a serious plot of any sort that didn't turn into a total cheese-fest?
This is not to say that there's not good porn (or clopfics, in this case), there's porn that, on a scale of "pr0n" to "Gentlemen's Entertainment" ranks right up there. I'd never submit it to a literary magazine, though. (and not just because it's got "adult" content) There's something weird about porn that causes a bit of a breakdown in developing something grand, something sweeping or epic.
Basically, there's porn that's and there's porn that's and there's porn that's ...and naturally there's some porn that's
This one is none of those. This clopfic easily hits with a bit of
If this were a movie, it'd be a popcorn flick. You go to watch it and enjoy it and feel you've gotten your money's worth (however much you spent on it) but maintain no illusions about whether it'd win an Academy Award or not.
Keep in mind that I (and the rest of the world) KNOW that the Michael Bay (MORE AWESOME!) Transformers movies are bad, but I still like going to see them. The G.I. Joe movie was BAD, but I still enjoyed the experience...so long as I could pause it periodically to keep from getting sick from the excess of 'SPLOSIONS!!!
tl;dr version - Don't change anything, I'm just ejaculating all over the response posts.
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Oh, you mean "campy" or "cheesy". Yeah, I'm okay with that. The only one I was trying to be semi-serious on was chapter 2 just with the scene where Twilight talks Celestia out of her depression.
Thanks for your response.
i cant wait for the next one
i`ll be honest i was waiting for an orgy as soon as i read cider party
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Yeah, I guess that would kind of lead one to think that. Sorry. I might have to try an orgy story later on, but I don't know if I'm ready yet.
your job is amazing anyways
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Thank you. Working on You Will Never Share an Intimate Moment with Rainbow Dash right now, hopefully it'll live up to the others.
this is so wrong and so right I mean oh good heavens
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Be sure to wash after you're done!
Why would you apologize for your preferences, fool?
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OH MY GOSH, HAVEN'T HEARD FROM YOU IN FOREVER
Because, not everyone appreciates kinkier fetishes. And I just wanted to reduce the amount of "what the fuck did I just read?" comments that I'd inevitably get.
714105 well, it's a decent story. any telling how long till the next bit comes out? I'm kind of into it now... and it says incomplete, soooooo...
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I mark it as incomplete because I know that I'll constantly have fantasies about the sun princess, therefore more stories to produce.
I actually starting writing chapter 5 last night. But it was late and I was sort of groggy, so I'll have to do some revising. But it is on it's way!
So, are these last two chapters in the same continuity as the first two?
They are, but they're out of order. It's:
1
2
4
3
I'm hoping I didn't overlook some sort of continuity error.
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Not officially at least, and/or not in these attires
I still have to post here but the formating is a bore.
Eh, I've read weirder on Topless Robot. If Fievel shitting everywhere in Mickey Mouse's house while finding sexual gratification in it won't scare me away, Molestia forcing Fluttershy to lap up her piss won't faze me either.
Once again, laughter ensued the moment I saw the molestia pics. Good game dear author
Sometimes I swear you and the mod for the molestia blog are best friends with those pics.,
What a beauty of a story.
>she had allowed Twilight Sparkles friends to write to her
This should have one (1) more apostrophe
>Could one of you inquire from somepony else with more information
This should start with a quotation mark
>she had acquired a new sensation in it’s place
its, not it's
This is the best chapter. Fucking fantastic.
When Fluttershy lapped up Molestias piss:
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You fucked up m8....