154774 I have this story on DA, the Clopfic Directory, and also the Explicit Pony Fiction Archive, so probably one of those. Glad you enjoyed it more than once.
230361 I know where you're coming from on describing past episode events, but my belief is that the author should include some descriptions just in the off chance that the reader isn't a fan of the show. Some of my friends who aren't bronies look up random fics sometimes, so they would need information like this to help with the story.
Well done! This was a great read. Kudo's on good gramar. Kinda surprised me at the end, not so Molestia. Don't get me wrong I love how it ended. Definitely started out full on Molestia tho. One of the better Clopfics out there in that it actually has some heart to it, which is always good. And as far as recounting past events I didn't feel intellectually insulted. I've seen it in plenty of other works. JK Rowling did it with the Harry Potter series until.. what, the 5th book? Anyways good read, I'll be watchin' you...
279955 Well, to be honest with you, I have finished a first draft of another Molestia fic, but I put it on hold to create a Derpy fic for the whole "Save Derpy" campaign. Hopefully Molestia 2 will be out before the end of March.
I'm not seeing any other comments about it. Is that scene where Twilight loses it just your rendition of the canon Twilight-loses-control scene, or is it a reference to Avatar: The Last Airbender? I mean, it sounded a lot like when Aang loses control of his powers after finding Monk Giatso and Katara brings him back from his rage. Could just be a coincident, though.
For these three parts, it should be Celestia's "However, on this day, Princess Celestials' usual calm" "important pony in Princess Celestias' life" "Twilight’s tongue instinctively began to move in tune with Princess Celestias’, both intertwined"
This sentence = "It was something that made her every day that she had chosen the right unicorn to become a mentor to."
Everything I had expected it to be and a little bit more. Yeah, it's a clopfic, but that little bit of unexpected kawaii at the end just got me. I think I'll follow this one and see how it ends. -puts fic in with box of guilty pleasures-
Comment posted by JHHylianLink deleted Jan 30th, 2013
Read this somewhere before. Can't remember where though. It was a decent read a still is for a Clopfic.
Very sexy.
Your name gives this story away
154774 I have this story on DA, the Clopfic Directory, and also the Explicit Pony Fiction Archive, so probably one of those. Glad you enjoyed it more than once.
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"Mm, I love the smell of pony musk." I loled
i have QUITE a few things to say about this fir-
*POMF*
«...»
nevermind that sums it up
Two shots! congats, its a clop fic
Okay. Detailed.
the pic almost killed me the story killed me
230361
I know where you're coming from on describing past episode events, but my belief is that the author should include some descriptions just in the off chance that the reader isn't a fan of the show. Some of my friends who aren't bronies look up random fics sometimes, so they would need information like this to help with the story.
wow, that was actually pretty good, maybe not as "molestia" as i thought it woudl be. nice job, could use a sequal~
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Even if it's a minuscule amount of readers, they're still worth considering to me.
Well done! This was a great read. Kudo's on good gramar. Kinda surprised me at the end, not so Molestia. Don't get me wrong I love how it ended. Definitely started out full on Molestia tho. One of the better Clopfics out there in that it actually has some heart to it, which is always good. And as far as recounting past events I didn't feel intellectually insulted. I've seen it in plenty of other works. JK Rowling did it with the Harry Potter series until.. what, the 5th book?
Anyways good read, I'll be watchin' you...
Any chance Chapter 2 will ever see the light of day?
279955
Well, to be honest with you, I have finished a first draft of another Molestia fic, but I put it on hold to create a Derpy fic for the whole "Save Derpy" campaign. Hopefully Molestia 2 will be out before the end of March.
I'm not seeing any other comments about it.
Is that scene where Twilight loses it just your rendition of the canon Twilight-loses-control scene, or is it a reference to Avatar: The Last Airbender? I mean, it sounded a lot like when Aang loses control of his powers after finding Monk Giatso and Katara brings him back from his rage.
Could just be a coincident, though.
281254
Coincidence. I've never seen a full episode of Avatar, but it looks like a good series from what little I've seen.
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I had to stop reading when she, uh... with the stuff... out of her horn. That bit felt a little too silly to me.
For these three parts, it should be Celestia's
"However, on this day, Princess Celestials' usual calm"
"important pony in Princess Celestias' life"
"Twilight’s tongue instinctively began to move in tune with Princess Celestias’, both intertwined"
This sentence =
"It was something that made her every day that she had chosen the right unicorn to become a mentor to."
wow this was awsome
Whelp...it's Molestia, all right.
It's...so...BAD, but I can't stop reading it!
Me no like. I don't know why. It's not that I hate clopfics, but, I dunno. I just don't like it.
Everything I had expected it to be and a little bit more. Yeah, it's a clopfic, but that little bit of unexpected kawaii at the end just got me.
I think I'll follow this one and see how it ends. -puts fic in with box of guilty pleasures-
Will she get the eyes will she
you ponies are so rude saying this fanfic sucks, this is why i dont write as much anymore
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
YO. FACE TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO
2590215
Your avatar is quite attractive...
308689
Just the name 'Princess Molestia', liking it already and I haven't even started lol !
Sad thi isn't being continued
That was simply incredible!!!!