Kingdom of Shadows

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GloomyFace

GloomyFace #1 · Jan 25th, 2013 · 2 · · Summons answered ·

Oh, Twilight. You summon two beings from a different plane of existence and what do you do? Buck them silly
I'm really interested about the repercussions her spell will cause. Please continue

Also, I'm surprised that no one commented on the story yet.

GloomyFace

GloomyFace #2 · Jan 27th, 2013 · 1 · · The pathways ·

Hmmm, this is getting more and more interesting. I love stories with complex worldbuilding, and if there's some clop from time to time? Perfect

So, Celestia senses the return of some great, old adversary, which she defeated 1k years ago with the help of dragons (which are reluctant to help her again) and darklings (whose she can't really contact - ha! Twilight thinks otherwise!), who possibly corrupted her sister and forced her to banish her. And meanwhile, some fanatics from the darkling realm for some reason try to release the corrupted princess. I... need... more...

Twilight is a bit of a sexual deviant in this story, but that's not really a minus for me. Being the Princess' prized protege must put a great stress on her. All this studying and trying to live up to her mentor's expectations... she simply needs to vent all the repressed emotions somehow

Oh and did I sense a hint of Celestia's hidden affection for Twi? Scandalous!

I honestly can't comprehend how in the world this story haven't got any more attention and comments... and this like/dislike ratio, ugh...

cherryfourier

cherryfourier #3 · Jan 28th, 2013 · 1 · · The pathways ·

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I think people came in expecting straight up Twilight/Celestia clop and instead got a mfm threesome, which might irked some. The stories tend to snowball - without the initial push of likes and comments people are disinterested when they find it in during browsing. I also need to dust off my tablet and draw a cover picture.

Thanks for your thoughts

Xaldon Ajide

Xaldon Ajide #4 · Feb 2nd, 2013 · 1 · · The pathways ·

I just can't wait till twi's next adventure with the darklings of the shadow realm also I do hope Celestia is able to find out what twi has been doing. and now who could that be knocking.