(First things first, imagine if this was turned into an anime, but the pony terms are still in use such as filly or everypony)
Cobalt a young colt who wanted to live the dream of the ever so great Octavia and Vinyl Scratch, the only problem is his style of music only peaks a few ponies interests, his soft rock music music just could not find appreciation. Although until recently he comes out of hiding and arrives in Ponyville to seek inspiration from anything to love, to art, to small things like a tiny bird. His first encount in Ponyville however, kind of shocks him beyond belief.
Chapters (3)
its a great fin and all but the Image of the fic kinda gives me a DARK vibe...........
It seems like you have a nice plotline going, but what you really need to work on is punctuation. I saw more than a few places where you missed a comma or something of the like; especially when someone was talking. If you can get that under control, you'll have a really nice fic in your hands.
2002815 Thanks Arma Im only beginning on writing fics so as of now ill try my best to present my best, but thanks for the feedback I appreciate it alot
I have to say you're doing better with the punctuation already.
Might be a good idea to elaborate on how Cobalt got to Ponyville at some point, too. And why Ponyville? Maybe he could be telling Fluttershy about it or something. Anyway, can't wait to see how he reacts to being Fluttershy's house.