Trixie would like nothing more than to destroy Twilight Sparkle for what she did to her, but Trixie is full of twisted emotions, and is plummeting into insanity. Will she be able to save herself before it is too late? Find something to hang onto?
Trixie would like nothing more than to destroy Twilight Sparkle for what she did to her, but Trixie is full of twisted emotions, and is plummeting into insanity. Will she be able to save herself before it is too late? Find something to hang onto?
Awsome plot! I would like to know when the next chaper comes out?
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Probably this week
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I'm writing another story at the same time, so the chapters will probably come out one at a time, one every week or 2 every week. promise
Just a tip: sound effects do not belong in any serious story. The first could be simply changed to "Trixie woke up screaming." The second would be improved simply by leaving the sound effect out.
Also, pick a viewpoint and stick with it. First person or third person, either is fine.
amusing very amusing
also the twiranchula was also amusing