Twilight accidentally transports the mane six(and several unknown others) to a version of Earth in another dimension. There they befriend two soldiers named Hayes and Ivan. The humans agree to help them get home, and the group embarks on a journey to visit the mystical Clayr. Along the way they will encounter many hardships, including Necromancers, the Dead, and a certain cross-eyed pegasus...
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boooooo generic nah jk
dude they deleted your comments? i didn't even get to to read them
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I deleted them. I was being super paranoid and asking you what you meant. Then my friend explained it for me. I really need to work on not questioning everything I see.
1873502 its ok man it was just friendly jest. I don't criticize
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Thanks, I really appreciate it!
Ok why didn't you just say Golden Oaks Library
Ponyville Library, Ponyville, Equestria where else would the ponyville library be
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Because that's how people do it in military movies, and my story has a military focus. Also I didn't know it was called Golden Oakes... and I'm a little OCD about stuff like that...
1873595 ok man i was just curious so this is gonna be all military and junk coo
Oh my god... my typing makes me sound like GLAdOS, or however it's spelled.
1873638 [This comment has been removed by its Author due to the fact that it is just paranoid rambling.]
1873656 you sir are paranoid so am i. i watched a vid and now im worried about slender man. I know he not real but still. I swear if i turn around and hes there im gonna be pissed
1873656 nope hes not there
1873686 So you like ole Slendy too eh? Just wait till my third story...
1873708 like him i just brought i knife with me to check if the dogs were ok cuz they wouldn't come to me!
i'm terrified nigga! 
of course they have a online game advertisement for a game where you breed horses on a brony site
1873745 I'm the opposite. I draw Operator Symbols on my Homework Planner...
1873752 i'm watching the making of marblehornets and that making me feel better me no scared any more
1873780 Good for you!
Ok, I'm scrapping the military style scene changes. I just realized that it shouldn't be too military considering that they're essentially deserters.
Addendum(4-6-13): Anytime a story is very militarily focused, I'm bringing back the military scene changes.
Finally! Too bad nobody human was at home... And perhaps they could take a boat? If one is there that is. The river leads right to the Clayr's Glacier after all. And they would get to see Highbridge. And it occurs to me that Twilight is going to LOVE the Clayr's Great Library.
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I'm working on the fourth chapter already, and it's going to be done a lot sooner than the third one! This fic is probably only going to be 6 or 7 chapters, but I am going to make this a series. Oh, and I will do something soon to make the story live up to the Teen For Gore rating.
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Eh, just a suggestion for mode of transport.
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My story gets so few comments that when someone does comment, I go a little insane. I think it's part of my eternal paranoia. Also, the fact that you've read the Abhorsen trilogy and actually know what I'm talking about may have contributed.
Well... That's a twist.
Guess they wern't the first to find the spell.
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Or maybe the necromancer sent them there on purpose by making some choice edits to Twilight's spell book. I actually haven't even planned that part out yet...
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I guess either works, but only if the necromancer can go between worlds at will.
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Tell me if this makes sense...
A unicorn is doing his/her magic thing. They accidentally screw it up and are transported to Ancelstierre. They embrace the dark art of necromancy, figure out how to reverse the spell, and transport back. Then, because they have a grudge or something against the mane six, they mess up Twilight's spell book. This causes the mane six to be transported to Ancelstierre, where the necromancer can summon copious amounts of Hands to deal with them. Now the necromancer also knows how to go back and forth at will using necromancy, probably using the River of Death as a pathway.
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Through Death? That's a lot of walking, and only Mordicants (And possibley some free magic entitys) can go there phisicley. They would need a body in each world. Need to shut down now. Sorry.
wow the captin needs to calm his tits
"Your equine friends are quite interesting" um uhh ya sounds pervy
NP
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Only you would say that...you monster.