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There's a mare in my school

Pinkie you really shouldn't have cheat codes enabled

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MailMareDerpy

MailMareDerpy #1 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

very nice. 4 stars definitely!!!

rainbowblitz246

rainbowblitz246 #2 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

cooool

Glassed

Glassed #3 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

I don't... ... ... ... ... ... For once I praise our new overlords!
-Glassed

Thy Obsessive Freak

Thy Obsessive Freak #4 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

I thought it was good, it sounded like all of the six manes, you involved Gummy and he was funny, but only gave 4 stars. I didn't find the flow of the dialogue, the way they spoke that satisfying. Felt like I was on a river where I ended up smacked against a rock a few times before I got to the end. I'm also going to need to be honest and say you didn't give me much reason to be interested in your story, from what you've just written so far, if you don't mind me saying and it is just to be honest. Maybe if you made if you got into the cheat codes a bit earlier or something.

CaveRave

CaveRave #5 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

"Teacher, I am very fucking scared! I see horses talking to me!"

ThunderStrike

ThunderStrike #6 · Feb 12th, 2012 · · ·

the whole cheat codes are enabled are refering to a poster that was put on memebase a long time ago. Thnx for reading you guys. Im writing one called Discord's Dievants.

feytey

feytey #7 · Feb 20th, 2012 · · ·

Yup I'm that Sam hagerty dude... No litteraly, I'm his friend irl :p (not a bad story but you can't write stuff this short bro. Ya gotta get details...)

hyourei