"Kathy, I'm lost." I said, though I knew she was sleeping.
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Being called away to her rock farm for an emergency, Pinkie Pie asks Rainbow Dash to watch Sugarcube Corner and alligator-sit Gummy for a couple of days. It's all going so well, until Dash sits down... and hears a squelchy noise underneath her. Oops.
Yes, the title is a direct call out to Weekend At Bernie's and this book. Just so we're clear.
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That was great xD
Pretty good!
for 'Weekend At Bernie's' reference alone ill read this...after reading it I like it and faving it.
That was brilliant!
That was hilarious! I had a feeling that Rainbow Dash overreacted, otherwise there would be a 'Sad' tag here. But boy, Gummy is quite a jerk, isn't he?
I have to say, this story was enjoyable that I think I'll favorite it.
This is the second Weekend at Bernie's story I've read this week. I might’ve liked this one more if I didn’t read the other one first.
Still, decent story. Your prose and word choice is a bit strange at times, and you seem to suffer from Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, but neither of those made the story unbearable or anything.
Have a like
I'd sell the alligator to a blind kid, personally.
This was enjoyable to read! I would love to see you do a moment with Gummy, talking about random things and life's meaning
Rainbow could have just chucked Gummy under the wheels of a passing cart and claimed that he'd been run over.
Uh, I don't mean to criticize you, but you might want to look back over your story in a few places. If you'll notice, you accidentally referred to Rainbow Dash as 'he' and Gummy as 'she' at times. You might want to fix that.
When I saw Rainbow’s opening "Oh no" I immediately read it like she said it when Spike burned Twilight's hair in "It's About Time".
Thumbs up.
8023757 Thanks
8023787 Coming from you, that's a great compliment.
8023809 Goodie!
8023855 Hoped you'd like it.
8023992 I like my big words, and I also hate repeating myself. It's just my way. Thanks for reading, though.
8024052 Hmm... I think I may have seen that movie already.
8024608 Perhaps, but I have enough on my plate right now. Maybe, someday...
8024781 PETA would just love you.
8025852 That image did cross my mind
Ha, "Alligator-sitting"
8025976 I've already made their shit-list a thousand times over.
You know what? This should be a full fledged episode. It's just that good!
You now may take 5 mustaches as your prize.
*Twilight OCD mode activated* Tank is a reptile, not an amphibian. He and Gummy also aren't slimy, they're scaly.
8099631 Oops sorry, I'll do a bit of choice editing to reflect those facts. Although in fairness, I did only call him an amphibian once. Thanks for the comment!
8099632 Your welcome.
Umm, your esophagus can't make shrieking sounds. It doesn't have vocal chords. Your larynx, however, can.
8107696 It's a good job it's so easy to edit on Fimfiction, eehhh?
That was pretty damn funny lol, great job!
Oh my gosh.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
*DIES LAUGHING*
Fun! I totally should've seen that ending coming.
But, I'd rather play Thermonuclear War!
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