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Leoheartxx2
Part artist, Part writer , Part student....All brony....XD
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Are they humans? because if they are then they don't have manes. it was a good story but needs some work
There are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. You should get yourself a pre-reader.
Well done man, well done.
This has a lot of the same feel as The Love of a Symphony
1893820 Really? Can you link me to the that fic so i can compare it to mine? If there's a major similarity I might have to edit it
1893416 Thanks
1892736 Well thats what im kinda afraid off. But I did intend to do it without a proof-reader at 1st to see how far could i go without messing the story with major grammar mistakes and spelling. Guess i still need help. Thanks for the feedback anywat
1892646 Well then you weren't reading my author's note. I clearly mentioned its more to antro or furries. So its a clear definition that words like " mane " , "tail' etc are used. Thanks for you feedback anyway
Good story with interesting and awsome description and a unique sentax as well, but the countless grammer errors left me filling in the blanks (so to speak) and killed it a little for me. And a helpfull warning ahead (giggity) of time that they are human rather than pony would be nice.
This is well written. I really want to like this story... I am usually of with a human in Equestria story but I hate ponies wih even remotely human charastics (aka hands) However I am not one to downvote because I don't like the theme of a story. So for that reason I will up vote.
1894973 Well I thank you for thy honest opinion, I generally like human and ponies mash up kind of universe, but to me it just seems more appropriate if 2 universe dont always collide. Anyway i did categorize this fic under alternate universe and not have humans in it
So yeah. . . its more towards antros
1894802 Yeah...Grammar mistakes. My nemesis
I hope it didnt kill your mood too much
1895205
It's fine. Grammer and I sometimes don't get along well either. Don't sweat it.
1895205I do my best to be un-baised... I think I am one of the lesser biased people in the world. I can always see both sides of an argument so reading and commenting are easy for me. ON TO THE NEXT STORY.
1895271 Ill probably take a break for a while. The one major problem i face when writing a clopfic is not that i ran out of ideas, but writing it constantly giving me a bonner. and i cant be fapping all day if you get what i mean
1895431... point taken. Twilight bring me the list of recomendations.
My little dashie is next.
Why is that still on there... I already read that......... next story.
1894580 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70616/the-love-of-a-symphony
1894580 Its not extremely MAJOR but i can see a few similarities.
@Leoheartxx2
Forgive me, but honestly, I find it hilarious that nopony seems to know what an anthro is.
Good story, I was a bit put-off by the many grammar mistakes, but it wasn't too bad. All in all, a good read.
1896558 Nah i kinda expected this kind of issues. Seems like not many people know whats antro are, but it was a nice attempt still to write it based on one. Perhaps the words furries might ring a bell
1896046 Hmmm...perhaps, but the similarities arent major. You gave me quiet a shock there, i was afraid i had to re-write it all over again
1896570
And personally, I associate the word 'Furry' with someone who's INTO anthros, but not as the same thing…I'm probably wrong though, so whatever! 
As long as the author is satisfied with their work, I always consider the fic a success.
Yo man. This has potential, want me to fix things up fer ya? Let me know asap.
1897002 Sure thing. How are you gonna do it?
if its more convenient just pm me
1896852 Actually antors and furries are quiet similar and are commonly mistaken for being the same. They are different , but only a few can tell them apart
1897343
*anthros
Yeah, I live with a furry, and a few of my friends are as well...I don't really consider myself one, though.
Thanks for mentioning me!
But there are actually still some wonky parts though
I was rushing due to various factors so this is the best I could come up with at that time. Hope the errors aren't too big to turn anyone off though...
1905817 Nha...not to worry. The error arent that big itself. Just dont forget to add back the quotations.
In anyway, thanks a lot for lending me a helping hand.
1907750 Anything for an awesome story
I gotta say, I simply LOVE this kind of atmosphere! A snowy night, a wooden manor, with a gorgeous fireplace and no lights on, classical soul-moving music, and a beautiful special somebody to love. You certainly are good at setting a scene. Heck the whole story is good. Very well done! Have a like and a mustache!
1911220 Thanks
As a pianist myself, I can say that this was freaking awesome!
You forgot the anthro tag
Wait, this is your first attempt at a clopfic?! You, my friend, are talented!