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Deep in the Everfree forest lies a dungeon kept in secret for decades, but what lay inside a pegasus not born normal but from magic. Imprisoned in crystal and chains, Fluttershy accidently stumble upon it and what she discovered will soon unraveled the legends that fortold the end of a civilisation centuries ago. A name only Princess Celestia knows all too well. He is Harbinger. ( Special Thanks to Moon_Fire for lending his helpfull and generous hand in fixing the chapters )
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This is just a Fanfic story based on my OC, specially requested by a friend of mine....hope you guys enjoy it.....any grammar and spelling mistakes are always welcome to be pointed out....
238379Umm....Quick Question....The OC dosnt hurt anypony....right?
23843This story already mentioned that he was responsible for the destruction of an entire civilisation...yes he has killed A LOT OF PONIES....but if your question based on what might happen after, then probably not.....
It feels a little rushed but seems interesting. Just watch the spelling like CANTERLOT, not CANTELOT.
he killed ponies...... why would he do that
CUz its FUN
on another note i like this and will look forward for more
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Yes the story was indeed rushed a little, cos when i had good things in my head i had to immediatly put it in before its gone....dont worry , spelling mistakes and gammar will be fixed when time allows....
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Thanks a lot...but killing wasnt his cup of tea...was forced to....
like a deal with the devil. aka Discord
a price to pay for everything...
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o well spose when his number comes up ..... ill make him see the error of his ways..... or his guts
aww it wasn't
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oohhh you....im afraid even Pinkimena Diana Pie cant touch him...Harbinger has posseses a large amount of power enough to wipe out and entire civilisation....but as the saying goes...." Sanity is but a measure of the mind " So
It was good but you REALLY need to rewright it. The entire thing is one big mess of grammar errors...try and get a proofreader or use spell check or something. Also try and add more detail to it.
But this does remind me of my first story. I lost alot of viewers because it was so bad grammer and spelling wise.
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Well i did mentioned that this was a rushed work in the comment above...yes a large pile of grammar mistakes and spelling error...but if time permits i will correct everything to a near flawless works...THANKS ANYWAY FOR THE FEEDBACK!!
great chapter, I want to see more of this. So........ I'm gonna track it!\
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Thank you very much...i think it's my obigation to say this...this chapter will undergo a fix, well too many grammar and spelling mistakes....so keep ur fingers cross and yes....I will indeed make more chapter....
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you really need a Grammar Nazi
good thing I am one and bored
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Can you clerify which point of my story, this 1.....is D'AWWWWWWWWWWW???? Im profound by ur comments...:rainbowhuh
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Well english was never my 1st language...but as i said it before on the earlier comments, this chapter will undergo a fix when time permits...
239195 i'm sorry but i ca't take it seriously and givin up your purity to save your own mother
that is why it deserves it i almost shed manly tears bro
239195 k you can contact me if you need me
Here's Harbinger's saying he can use.
"That which you know as Harbinger is your salvation through destruction."
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errr.....i guess its a compliment that i can make sum1 cry....
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so your're saying u would help to fix up grammar mistakes and speeling error?
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Well dont worry dear fan....i have plenty of quotes like this in my head.....badass OC deserve badass quote...
243168 Yes I would
That cover art is epic
I want it as my desktop backround
>>Leoheartxx2
Indeed they do. That is one of my favorite type of quote. Though I've used a different name for the one part. But saying Hatvinger in it sounds cool.
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Well its nice to hear that sum1 actually willing to offer help in trying to fix my grammar mistakes and spelling errors....but ill have to consider it 1st...ill PM you when i feel that you can take the job....
and the cover page.....hahaha...i get that a lot....thanks again...
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Well for those who had been tracking this story...ill have to mention this before i disappoint any1 in the end.....
This is a story for my OC....hence its will only have very few chapters...maybe 3 or 4 depending how well it is understood...
Daammm was hoping for more
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Well it all depends...my original intention was just a brief story for my OC, if i can get more likes and viewers i might be able to expand more...well keep ur fingers cross....chances might just present itself.....
246584 I'd like to see him meet the mane 6
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Well i cant gurrently anything...since as a writer i cannot disclose any information of future chapters...but thank a lot for tracking this....keep your fingers cross....and u might get what u want....
Well most poeple are dicks and only give good ratings if your writing stile is very good...the same thing happened with my first story. I was horrid when it came to grammer and because of that everyone gave me bad ratings and no one wanted to read my story except a few who didnt care about the grammer mistakes. My story was pretty good but my writing was bad, but now that i have better writing skills im hoping my next story will go better
Its also about origonality. If you look back at some of the best mlp fics that have ever come out llike my little dashie or cupcakes, they did so well because no one had ever thought up those ideas before.
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Well what you said are all true.....facts and life when writing a story...god My little Dashie always bring back tears...
But as far as originity is concern, I keep that point my top most priority....cos i do not want to "Accidently" copy the works of others.....and as far as i am assured, no 1 has yet to use the concept of the horsemen...if ur a christian than im sure u know this at least....
If you notice some charatcers plays a similar role...
Discord = The devil
Harbinger = One of the Horsemen
The princess = (soon to be ) God
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oh btw i love the new picture for this story...epic
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Thanks btw but the new pic isnt by me....this is an improvement done by a friend of mine...the 1st pic was mine...new pic was by him...xD
glad to know that too....
your grammar sucks
but I know you just need a Grammar Nazi to look through it and correct all the mistakes
PS: I'm a Grammar Nazi
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.....I noe how excited are you to help me but be aware i cannot simply allow any1 to just fix it up without my concence....
Like i said before.....i appriciate ur intention, so I WILL PM you when i feel u are ready to take the job.....
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Oops....
I forgot that I had already said that
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......you dont say?
Im gonna say this 1st before any1 starts to rage for me being bad in grammar and spelling.....This chapter IS DONE IN A RUSH! Cos I GOT A PLANE TO CATCH! SO yeah.....I WILL HAVE IT FIX AFTER I RETURN.....K THANSK BYE!!!
lol
OK IM BACK.....BUT....im still gonna be really occupied for the next few days or even weeks...damm assigment...
So have faith...for i will RETURN!! WITH MORE!!!
ok there were so many grammar errors compared to you last chapter...but over all the story was good
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ya i noe....ill was typing it out of rush cos i have a habit of writing my ideas down as soon as it poops out of my head, so grammar mistakes are like a constance thing...but worry not...do read again cos i have already had sumbody generous enough to help me fix everything.....
More Damit!!!!!!!!!!!
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Soon...but not this week, im currently undergoing many exams right now and so i cant really write much....BUT SOON
Do track this story for more update and Follow me if your find it nice.....
Twilight is best ninja
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hahaha....indeed she is...
Finnaly done....Spelling mistakes and Grammar Error are inbound...but do read on....ill get the fixed version later...
Did you make everything after the letter bold on accident?
Harbinger...
Now that's a name I haven't heard in a long time...
Why does it sound so familiar?
Oh, now I remember:
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"Why so serious, Crest?"
So many LOLs
Btw. Crest becoming a servant of Discord is like Anakin becoming the apprentice of The Emperor in Revenge of the Sith. That's what came to my mind anyway.