Fair Flame is a unicorn living in a Canterlot suburb with his mother, Mahogany Glee, and father, Swift Drift. This work of prose follows his journey and growth from a young colt to a young stallion. Join him and his friend Vinyl Scratch as they fight crime (not really), take tests (quite probably), become alicorns (no), and generally do things of a cute and d'awwable manner.
So what are you waiting for? Get in there and tell me what a miserable excuse for an author I am and how I should go cry myself to sleep in a corner every night, or give me constructive criticism, that works too.
!Warning! Contains young ponies, old ponies, first time fanfic writer, milk, and soy.
Chapters (7)
If you're going to dislike it then please leave a comment telling what turned you off of it. Pwetty pwease?
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Okay, I am officially amused. I LOVE this writing style, it's so quirky you can't help but love it. I'd say Pratchet-esque if I actually read enough Pratchet to know, so I guess it'd be sounds-like-Pratchet-esque? Oh, whatever, it's funny!
Fair is a fun friend to a felonious filly, so I'll favorite this fic.
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Thank you for the favorite and the comment.
I was hoping that someone would get some amount of amusement from my little literary foray.
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EXCUSE ME BUT I THINK YOU STOLE MY OC PONY, BLAZE
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We'll have to take this to court!
Lawyers, ASSEMBLE
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I, too, cackled at the little filly's use of the word 'stud.'
I really like this version of Celestia.
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You know I love you, but I can't help but feel we're going too fast.
I'm not ready for the kind of commitment commenting on every one of my chapters entails. It's not you, it's your body.
Carry On
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There's such a thing as 'too fast?'
'Magicked' Wut?
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Magicked:
Variant of magic
noun
1. a the use of spells, charms, and rituals in seeking or pretending to cause or control events or to govern certain natural or supernatural forces; occultism
1. b such spells, charms, etc.
1. c any mysterious, seemingly inexplicable, or extraordinary power or quality: the magic of love
1. d the art or performing skill of producing baffling effects or illusions by sleight of hand, concealed apparatus, etc.
Origin: ME magike < OFr magique < L magice < Gr magikē (technē), magic (art), sorcery < magikos, of the Magi: see Magi
adjective
2. a of, produced by, used in, or using magic
2. b producing extraordinary results, as if by magic or supernatural means
Origin: L magicus < Gr magikos
transitive verb magicked, magicking
3. a to cause, change, make, etc. by or as if by magic
3. b to make disappear by or as if by magic: with away
2748146 Okey...
Here's a recommendation tho: type things like 'Used her magic to' instead of 'Magicked', Now this may seem bothersome, but it'll end with slightly longer chapters and more people actually understanding what you ment.
2748146 Btw, mind updating your story anytime soon? I mean I am patient, but even that's limited.
2748146 6 weeks and not a new chapter? Is this even canceld or on hiatus?
Interesting style. Read up some on comma usage. Ignore the down-voting churls.
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Thank you for comment kind Sir.
If there's anything I'm guilty of it's being a comma whore, but I like to think that's covering up for my lack of talent.
I mean skill.
No, intelligence.
I'm going to quit while I'm down. Danke once again Herr. Plus, new updates soon.
I'm a writing machine I know.
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3152860 And I'm still patiently awaiting a new chapter.
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Sorry, I just have a hard time staying with anything, my muse is very ADD.
I do plan on continuing this, though I thought I changed all my stories to "On Hiatus."
I'll probably focus on this one story in particular, I kinda know where I want to go with it, and if I can keep other ideas out of my head for long enough, I might actually be able to get somewhere with it. I honestly didn't think anyone would really care about the little bit of stuff I got here, but it's definitely a pleasant surprise.
I won't promise anything, but maybe I can get the next chapter with decent quality and length to you by Monday.
Ciao!
Carry On
5051544 Will I have to wait for another year? :P
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Yes.
But all good things to those who procrastinate!
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What happened to the cover art?
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I have no idea, but I updated it with a new one. I like it a lot more than the old one.
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