Hey! So, aspiring author/brony here! Chalk one up for the Canadian team! WOO!!! Yeah, soo... not really sure what to put here...
A simple walk through the woods turns into much more than Alastair imagines, as he soon finds himself in a land filled with mythological creatures, and he himself is considered a creature of myth.
How much has his sudden appearance disturbed the (relative) peace of Equestria? Will he ever find his way home? ...or want to?
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Wait what?
What are the ponies supposed to look like in this? I can't tell if your ponies are anthromorphic or if there is something that makes Alistair see ponies as humans and makes ponies see humans as ponies...
Also when I saw Alistar Equus my first thought was about LoL
126559 I think they are anthro, cause they have hands, and clothes, but also fur...
nice story ^^ tracking
This story seems like it is gong to be amazing.
5 stars and tracking.
This is quite an interesting name, being an Allistair myself. Kinda deja-vu inducing.
*Interesting story. Sorry, feeling sleep deprived.
moar!!!!!!!!
i sense a triangle love catastrophe in the making!!!! this seems like a pure story i like it
I'm tracking
-Glassed
fantastic
...what? People actually like my work? AWESOME!!!
Sorry to those who can't picture it, I thought it was fairly descriptive... but yes, as Vash said, it's Anthro. Sorry if that offends you in some way?
I'll try and find some pics of how I see them...
***Two hours later***
WHY NO CAN FIND GROUP PIC AS I SEE?!?
Fine, just take these and go!
Group: http://kyo4kusanagi.deviantart.com/art/Mane-siX-X3-269008192?q=gallery%3Aanthro-mlp%2F33915841&qo=24
http://extvia.deviantart.com/art/Friendship-is-Magic-243863158?q=boost%3Apopular%20anthro%20my%20little%20pony&qo=41
Also: http://cookingpeach.deviantart.com/art/Dash-268123854?q=gallery%3Acookingpeach%2F18447012&qo=5 (Dash, but artist has others as well)
.127358 (Allistair) Don't worry, quite a bit of this was written around 2am my time, I know of sleep deprivation! :twilightsheepish
:127717 (Ninjastar)*Rattles chain* Quiet you fool, you'll give it away!
20 bonus points to the person who correctly guesses what that's quoting.
And all you see is a love triangle? You should see the drama going through my head! The heartbreaks! The heartmends! The Pinkie Pie Party! The Discord! (Oops, did I just say that?)
Oh, and "Moar"? "MOAR"? THAT BEHEMOTH WAS 12 PAGES LONG AND YOU WANT "MOAR"? THEN MOAR YOU SHALL HAVE!
Soon. As soon as it's finished. And edited. And I've overcome my inevitable panic attack at the thought of people reading my works.
sorry, sheesh
129569 Hey, no need to apologize! If anything, I'm sorry!
If my descriptions weren't clear enough for you to see things in the story as how I saw them, I see it as a failure on my own part.
I'm trying to be clearer in the second chapter (Which is close to being finished!)
When I first read the title I first thought of Alistair Crowley for some reason. I'll read the story... sometime. I need a nap right now.
Fuck yeah! Awesome chapter!
All my stars. You have them.
Keep up the awesome work!
he totally jynxed it..
also nice story, but I got a bit lost with that... singing?
302064 Why yes, yes he did, didn't he?
Glad you're enjoying it (less glad about that thumbs down, but that's beside the point right now!
)
Ok, singing? Concept came from... well, have you SEEN "Smile Smile Smile"? She summoned a parade out of thin air, there HAS to be something magical there!
The actual implementation of it in the story? Less pleased with that, definitely going to tone it down in future chapters...
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by the way, I declare myself not guilty about the thumbs down, you are doing a nice job ^^
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and the idea of the songs is good, but you took it off your sleeve too fast... Like he suddenly thought "hey! I can change the world with songs!"
lol´d at the end, kissed an apple, ate two trees... ^^
Am I commenting too much?
410036 Commenting too much? Never! I'm just glad someone IS commenting! It's been getting a bit unnerving, with all the silence, really...
"People are reading this stuff... but they're not saying anything! Is that good? Is that bad? Is that mediocre? WHAT DOES IT MEAN!" 
And thanks for the feedback, an excellent point I wish I'd thought of earlier...
Good to know!
I don't have to block you from my story now! (...can anyone even DO that? Not that I would, everyone's free to their own opinion...)
558814 My pleasure!