Once upon a time, Princess Luna woke up on a beautiful, golden looking morning. Princess Luna always dreamt of exploring the world.
I'm a very outgoing person and my favorite my Little Pony is Luna. I'm a very fun person to hang out with.
Once upon a time, Princess Luna woke up on a beautiful, golden looking morning. Princess Luna always dreamt of exploring the world.
I hope that you guys enjoy my new story. A lot of thought was put into it.
I just... I can't read this. The spelling, the grammar, the run-on sentences...
I won't downvote, but I won't upvote or favourite it either.
i like it.
Hey there. As promised, I read your story, and I give you a thumbs-up for effort.
If you would like to grow as a writer, my best advice for you would be to read. Read as much as can, both online fics and published books. Don't worry about what kind of books or stories they are--just make sure you like them enough to read them all the way through, and that they have good punctuation/grammar/spelling. By reading other folks' material, you'll be able to pick up a lot of tips and tricks.
Have a great night!
It was good.
I liked it very much.
Just fix it a bit. Has a few things to correct.
what do i needto correct?