An argument was all it took. The Elements' power weakened as the Mane Six split apart, and Discord found himself loose once more. And this time, he decides to learn from his past mistakes and ensure nothing can stop him again.
The problem arises, of course, when he finds he's not enjoying it nearly as much as he should be.
First of multiple chapters. All plotholes will be explained in time, and characters will be added to the tags as they appear in the story!
Please excuse any formatting errors, as I only have access to Wordpad (perish the thought!) and I have to re-format everything manually when I paste it into the RTE.
That said, this is the first story I've submitted to the site, so any and all feedback is welcomed!
Chapters (2)
I loved it, magnificent story-line. and well written too. it has all the makings of an epic story so far, i hope to see more.
you suck
As much as I like the idea of Discord escaping again and learning upon his past mistakes, you didn't give any explanation as to why exactly mane 6 were fighting between themselves. I hope you'll expand this.
Other than that, it looks like a solid story. Curious to read more.
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Thanks a bunch! I'll try and write more ASAP :>
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Yeah, that explanation will be forthcoming in a later chapter. Mystery and intrigue ooooh. /waggly hands
Thanks for the interest you guys! :D
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
nice story, here. I'll track it and get back whenever you give us more
who cares about why they fought, it was a plot device that i quite frankly don't want to hear about.
Interesting and well -written... I love Discord in fics, he always makes them fun. The possibilities in the upcoming storyline look very attractive...
Also, what's up with that guy? He didn't even give a reason or think up anything inventive for an insult. (His name was very obliging here.)
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Thanks guys! <3 It's encouraging to hear stuff like that.
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Weeell you're gonna hear about it anyway! I'll try and make it interesting though, so uh - don't dread it or anything haha.
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Thank yoooou :D I haven't written anything in ages so breaking into this fic was kind of iffy for me. I was like oh god what if they hate it and then I was like.... oh nvm they like it yaaay. |D thanks!
And don't pay any attention to that type of commenter, it's just a troll looking for a response. :>
Kind of rushed this chapter out aaahh
but um
tell me what you think! :0
I WANT MORE ITS SO GOOD PLZ GIVE MEH MORE!!!
This is a really good piece of fanfic. Please, keep up the good work!
I like where you are going with this story!
Dammit I NEED MORE.
Heh. Even when hope has failed, apathy can defeat a mischievous despot. Assuming, of course, that Twilight has accurately followed the thought process of the incarnation of chaos.
This is a most engaging read. I look forward to more.
Revalations like that one usually hit the hardest, (like a ton of feathers, It's Discord yo).
This probably sounds a bit odd, but you have actually gotten me to feel a bit bad for the chaotic spirit.
Can't wait for more though, the story has latched onto my emotions, and I'm afraid it won't let go till the stories over.
This looks promising; Tracking this fic now~
Why did this end? So much could be done!
I don't find too many fanfics I actually like. This is one of the rare few I do find. Surely it's not over for good. It seems that way, but I'm going to hope it will finally be updated someday.