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Princess Luna's Big Dream

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Once upon a time, Princess Luna woke up on a beautiful, golden looking morning. Princess Luna always dreamt of exploring the world.

Chapters (4)

Princess Luna's Sad · 8th Dec 2012 · 298 words
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Princess Luna's Big Dream · 8th Dec 2012 · 228 words
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Princess Luna's Big Dream Comes True · 8th Dec 2012 · 293 words
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Princess Luna in Paris <3 · 8th Dec 2012 · 316 words
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BabyLuna123

BabyLuna123 #1 · Dec 7th, 2012 · · · Princess Luna's Sad ·

I hope that you guys enjoy my new story. A lot of thought was put into it.

CluelessBrony

CluelessBrony #2 · Dec 8th, 2012 · · · Princess Luna's Sad ·

I just... I can't read this. The spelling, the grammar, the run-on sentences...

I won't downvote, but I won't upvote or favourite it either.

dragondude2201

dragondude2201 #3 · Dec 8th, 2012 · · · Princess Luna's Sad ·

i like it.

Bad_Seed_72

Bad_Seed_72 #4 · Dec 9th, 2012 · · · Princess Luna in Paris <3 ·

Hey there. As promised, I read your story, and I give you a thumbs-up for effort.

If you would like to grow as a writer, my best advice for you would be to read. Read as much as can, both online fics and published books. Don't worry about what kind of books or stories they are--just make sure you like them enough to read them all the way through, and that they have good punctuation/grammar/spelling. By reading other folks' material, you'll be able to pick up a lot of tips and tricks.

Have a great night!

Demon_Cloud