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SuzukiDragon


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Twilight is beaten, at the end of her own story, and wonders where she went wrong. What she does not plan on, is a chance to use powerful magic that allows her to redo her entire life with all her present knowledge. How will history change if Twilight repeats her life, this time with the knowledge of a full grown mare with huge reserves of arcane power? Set in an alternate Equestria featuring a much darker and slightly evil Twilight.

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Comments ( 11 )

Technically my first fanfic ever... I say Technically because while I have written basic plot points and various story esque things before, I haven't actually felt confident enough about anything to submit it.

Feel free to provide criticism, and please tell me where to improve.:twilightblush:

Oh Twilight, what have you done? :facehoof:
A second chance at life, and with all that extra magic, I guess when Trixie comes to town for her first time, she's gonna get a shock... :trixieshiftright:

1738756 Nope. Though it has some pretty good ideas. Not that I'll use many of them, since this isn't a normal Twilight who followed the general plot line of the show. This is a rather grimdark Twilight, who may discover that being kind and good-hearted is quite difficult.

I am intrigued, please continue.

I will be watching this one. I like the idea of a redo as it were. Though I am quite curious as to the details of what exactly Twilight did.

oh boy... a story plot that can go anywhere.....
me like that a lot! do make more! :twilightsheepish:

And... I accidentally several months. It's been far too long since I even thought of working on this story, so I decided it was the perfect time to work on it!

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