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I'm torn between feeling bad for Dusty here or SCREAMING AT YOU FOR UPDATING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT?!?!?!?!!?!?!? I mean surely you wouldn't make me have to go sleepless right? RiGhT?
Anyway, nice chapter though it was kinda unexpected on my part. So will we be seeing more of Dusty the bat pony maid?
Regardless back to the being sleep deprived........... yay
Edit: I got first in the comments?!?!?! Wat (Don't hate on me)
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I'm currently at work, where I have literally nothing else to do but either watch youtube, listen to music, or write on my stories. It's a 12 hour shift, I have to fill the time somehow xD.
And you very much will be seeing more of this mare's antics!
The Twilight in the Author's Note is much more terrifying than the Twilight in the story
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I agree!
nods approvingly
Good, I shall keep Twilight from killing you
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... I'm at chapter five, and 'search text' within Firefox works wonders for tracking. Trust me, 'mane six' will stand out, as it is used at least twice per chapter up to that point.
In short, I'm invested in the text and am unwilling to go back for that. Onwards!
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lmao, no worries! I have already gone back using said word search and have completely replaced those phrases xD
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Just finished reading your work so far, and am pleased to say you earned the fav. The thumbs-up you earned due to the diligence in correcting your work, and overall positive reception of feedback, judging by the comments.
So, with this being said...
'Sir, can I have some more?'
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I am very thankful of your kind words! They mean so much to me, you have no idea lol.
As for your last request, I am working to get the next chapter of this story out, however if you wouldn't mind, I could direct you to another story of mine that I'm also writing to help keep the creative flow going. You can find it through my page and I hope you like it as much as this one.
I'm trying to update the two within a similar time frame, so there is a good chance that it will be the next story to receive a new chapter.
Heeeeyyy, that's *jsjsbsbdk* Sweeety Belles line
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As brutally honest as always xD
Keep it up!
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As long as you will <3
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You got it!
it's impossible to remove blood from carpet.
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Why do you think the carpets were removed. XD
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exactly
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But...weren't the carpets red before the blood got on it? I mean it's not like the nobles would pay attention. And if they notice, they deserve a few good scares once in a while. I have no doubt that the vast majority of them will be calling for Twilight/Dimmed's head on a pike.
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If it were most anything other than blood, you would most likely have a sound argument. However there is something you aren't taking into consideration: Coagulation.
When blood is exposed to the air, it immediately begins to coagualate. On the body, this begins the healing process as the blood hardens and turns darker and darker, to an almost black. This forms what we call the scab and acts as a natural bandage to prevent further loss of blood.
When the blood on the floor, or any other surface for that matter, coagualates, it continues this process and turns from red to almost black. On a bright red carpet such as that, it would appear as a large black, crusty stain. Trying to remove it without damaging the carpet is pretty much impossible, which is why in most cases where an incident occurs with a great deal of blood loss and there is carpet, regardless of the color, the carpet is removed and replaced.
*sees title* *pulls out a holy cross while sitting on a chair and slow pushes the chair back while sitting on the chair*
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this looks bootiful
get an exorcist
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You act like that is going to save you from this xD
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I Concur! xD
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The Laughing Mare?
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Pony version of the laughing god from warhammer 40k
Pretty sure
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I don't know much about Warhammer either xD
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Fair enough
This whole chapter... wonderful comic relief.
i keep laughing so hard every time i read the authors note
Congrats Dusty Joy! Welcome to Viscera Cleanup Detail!
Well... at least she is not going to die! That is not as common these days...