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I say let the bastard bleed out. He's done nothing to deserve sympathy.
Honestly I’m shocked at just how much blood he can lose and still have a beating heart.
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Tiny Spoiler:
that will be addressed in the next chapter lol
There’s something a bit off with that Brutus... This might be what’s left behind when Dimmy consumes a ponies soul or something. Characters are all quite strong here, suggests the pre-SE1 relationships before Twilight showed up. We rarely get to see who the Main Five are when she’s not around. You were worried about the Authors Note gag getting stale, way to keep it fresh!
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No, he's pretty fucked up though, His inner thoughts tell us he's still himself, but he was hurt pretty bad by Dimmed, so physically he's not doing so well.
Edit: Though with that spoiler I'm starting to think Dimmed did something to him, whatever it was certainly didn't affect him mentally yet.
1. don't worry rainbow_dash, you won't have to break this to scootaloo.
2. they're going to think dimmed_star killed scootaloo and her mother.
3. she did kill her dad though, the only one besides cheerilee who could testify on her behalf.
all of these points have me eagerly waiting the next chapter.
A special thanks for me not actually proofreading this chapter lol
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Well, I figured you were busy
Hm, the stage is set for history to repeat itself. When Dimmed Star reveals the true villain, will her friends believe her when she needs their support most or abandon her to a dark fate like at the wedding?
(A part of me also wonders if this is like the party when Star waited until her friends admitted they were afraid of her. Did she set the scene like this on purpose?)
...Odd, why is he alive? I am certain that Dimmed Star didn`t accidentally let him live...