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Interesting. The girls are probably going to have an incredibly bad time when the entity formally known as T Sparkle gets there. Also is anyone else getting Darkness flashbacks from the puddle snakes?
more?
I just imagined this "Twilight" becoming a Princess.
Diplomacy and Court would become a whole lot more interesting , given her spontaneous bouts of demonic transformation and her willingness to eat something that bother her.
No! I thought that this was actually being updated! Not being rewritten! How could you do this!
Fine! Have a video!
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I'm so sorry! But it HAD to be done! Not only has my writing improved a tremendous amount since I began to story so long ago, but there was SO much else that needed to be done! It was far too rushed and there were too many instances that were anticlimactic and needed to be drawn out more for suspense. The characters needed to be more fleshed out and the horror aspect of the story needed one heck of a tune up. I'm sorry, but it had to be done. I hope this rewrite is enough to bring back some of the joy you felt from the original!
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Anticlimatic? I would argue about that, but unfortunately, I can't really remember the original...and now, because of you, I'll never be able to read the original again! Because its no longer there to be read! I guess it's true what they say. You can never go home again.
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I'm so sorry!!!
I'm guessing the next chapter is the battle *cough* sorry SLAUGHTER *cough*?
What have you become, indeed.
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It never gets old when someone points out the similarity of her serpents and that game. Honestly I've never played it nor did the inspiration for her serpents come from that, at least not from me! If you type in Dimmed Star in Google images, you'll find pics of her almost always with one or two black serpents next to her or coming out of her puddle in some way lol.
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That very well could be the reason, but regardless, it's an integral part of her character, so they aren't going anywhere xD
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Interesting. Always fun to see something developed independently from multiple sources.
Can someone remind me what this story formerly was, please? Preferably in detail.
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This Story was almost the same as what is written, only it was more rushed, the pacing was off, there were grammar and spelling errors EVERYWHERE and my writing style was mediocre at best.
Not only is this Rewrite FAR superior, but I'm aiming for it to be a very long read.
I wanna read moar! Guess I'll have to be patient. You have a great story going here, I don't think I've seen one like this and it is shaping up to be a must read. The only regret I have is I can't give it a 👍 for every chapter.
Even with the update speed that you currently have, it's still not fast enough for my liking. This is so thrilling, and I want more!
Awesome Cadence is the princess of love so seeing an entity of hate that is also all that is left of her beloved former charge would be a full blown night terror come to life. And she only focuses on the positive side of love, but love can work both ways, it can bring great happiness or unbearable dispair. I always thought that your version of Dimmed star was the perfect example of not just Twilight but anyone who has had their heart broken beyond repair. And no amount of apologies from those responsible would ever wash away what they did. Chrysalis feeds on love, it's poetic Justice that she be devoured by hate, taking host in the body of the one pony she never should have underestimated. Even the most benevolent of souls can only take so much before the inner evil that resides in all living things is brought to the surface to destroy the cause of such pain.
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YOU, sir/ madam, Have earned yourself an internet Cookie
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Thanks, now about her tongue!!!!!?
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What about it?
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I just asked in the last chapter, does it come to a fork?
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oh! I just saw it lol. No her tongue isn't forked.
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Thx
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Doesn't help, but I'm interested indeed
(Was it only 3/4 chapters long before? Cause I think I remeber it)
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Actually it was about 6 chapters.
I get SCP 106 vibes from this. Was it perhaps an inspiration?
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Ya got me dead to rights! XD
Huh. It does seem like this is less of a symbiotic realtionship between two entities, and more so a fusion of two entities into a hybrid individual.