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lol and looks like two other pones are on the mauling list. tho quick question the thing you did with the changelings was that more brutal form mutation or just being ripped apart?
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I suppose I won't consider it a spoiler to say that it was mutation.
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ok thats what i was thinking
i love how your expanding bast the three tabs your using a bit of slice of life. and hits of a scottloo/spike ship and stuff like that
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I'd have more tabs but fimfiction wont let me add them xD
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Yeah fair point hahaq
I was rather hoping Star was suspicious enough to have followed.
Hhhmmm I wonder how much they would pay for a few of my tanks....
I had always felt that Spike should try a relationship with one of the cmc, for any one of those three have traits similar to his. His crush on Rarity is a pipe dream, her standards are to high. After hearing about Scootaloos parents I have a feeling that those unfortunate guards at the wedding won't be the only time Dimmed Star will taste pony flesh. Have a nice holiday SD hopefully will hear from you soon.
P. S
Lock Dimmed Star in a dog cenel before you leave, you can't carve a Christmas goose with no arms
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its called exposition, and lengthening the story
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No need for condescension.
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not trying to be, rather constructively criticizing
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You are constructively criticizing a comment I made that mostly expressed impatience/a general desire for a specific variation of an upcoming conflict. You did so by citing a general concept of narrative flow. For future reference it would likely come off as less condescending if you just counciled patience.
>>Vaguely Demented
Hmmm, i see. well i apologize since that sounded rude, i'm kinda new to the whole 'critique' thing
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Fair enough. Apology accepted.
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There for a bit I was wondering if I should step in, but I am happy to see that you both made amends and that no harm was done.
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Eh, i try to get along. sometimes it doesn't work per se
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Be kind of ironic to make a permanent enemy on a site dedicated to the magic of friendship.
TwiPie and ScootaSpike. SHIIIIIIIIIIIP!!!!
So glad we’re getting so many plotlines. I really hope Dimmed, Pinkie, Spike, and Scoots form some kind of family dynamic. I’m a sucker for those.
Getting some Parasite Eve vibes from that opening.
How can you write your OC out of character?
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Dimmed Star isn't his OC. The Equinox ponies were made by someone else. While technically he isn't using the blog for his story, Dimmed Star is supposed to be evil, they all are.
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Well...
(0:04)
And no, I'm not actually gay.
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*in caveman voice* You write. update story. *proceeds to make ape noises*
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He has some irl stuff going on, but he has been trying his hardest to write.
You can join our Discord server ( https://discord.gg/NjtqShb ) to receive the latest news whenever he comes online
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I'll think about it.
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That's all I can ask for
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I don`t know how to feel about that last part.