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I told you to watch out for them Shaded I told you
IT'S ALIVE!! IT'S ALIVE!!!! IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!
*Shortly After A/N* Edguy: *walking past* Not this again.
YES! It's back and I love it!š
*Raises glass of chocolate milk* And here's to more chapters to come!
It feels wrong that I found this A/N funny...
so friends come across as entitled in this one, was that intentional?
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Uh not quite? Does it work with the flow of the story at least?
It's so good to have you back, don't know how you did this during a midlife crisis, let alone found the inspiration, but I admire your dedication and hope you will continue to post even after the series ends. Twili...Dimmed Stars friends better tread lightly, she may be giving them the benefit of the doubt, but if they start behaving like they did nothing wrong...technically Dimmed isn't a pony anymore, so it wouldn't be considered cannibalism.
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they dont come across entitled at all. it feels more like they couldnt even begin to wrap their heads around this at all, one day their friend is a normal pony, the next an ink base creature, how do you even comprehend that?
Okay, seriously. The fk are these author's notes?
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it works in it's own way but it's the sense of 'we did favor x so you need to forgive us' kind of thing, it happens a lot in these stories so can't fault it to you but it feels flat in the end, like twilights forgiveness is something they have a right to buy.
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You'll like Chapter 22 then
woops, spoilers
Iād say Zecora and Stars first meet up is likely to be...unique to say the least.
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Think about what?
Hell yeah, glad to see you back at it again
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Well then who made the OCs?
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
This is actually really fucking good, the charcters have been realistic, the pacing is satisfying and doesn't feel to slow or fast, and Dimmed Star is a absolutely great interpretation of a corrupted/slightly evil Twilight.
The Authors notes at the end of each chapter are hilarious, and while not a part of the story they add to it by giving us a bit of a laugh at the end of the grimmer chapters. The concept is Interesting and really well done.
Long story short? You did a excellent job on this story
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
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Hey there! The Equinox Ponies were designed and created by the wonderful Riygan who was kind enough to give me permission to use his characters in my Fanfictions.
You can check out their Deviant Art by clicking the Link or searching him up on Google!
Ok you two remember if you're wanting him to get out chapters in a timely manner the fewer bones and limbs I have to replace the faster I can get him up and alive.
Well then, I was not expecting the ending of this chapter to be filled with comedy. Good job!